I am writing an essay and I want to make that sentence ("I had a life-changing experience") sound smarter and add some more details to it. The paragraph below is the paragraph right before the concluding paragraph. Please help me finish this.
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Then I would go on to ask, do I regret having such breakdown? I suppose I do somewhat, in terms of having missed so many opportunities I could have had instead. Nonetheless, I had a life-changing experience ___________________________. In short, it is the existence of the remorseful past that, I believe, is the engine of my progress to a vital life.
2006-10-11 14:45:15 · 10 answers · asked by Adrianna Lima 2 in Education & Reference ➔ Higher Education (University +)
I had an experience that changed my life.
2006-10-11 14:46:26 · answer #1 · answered by Krishna 4 · 0⤊ 2⤋
in case you frequently do what you have continuously completed, what you will get is what you have already have been given. as a fashion to discover new oceans, one ought to be prepared to lose sight of the shore. The enhanced the wind, the enhanced the wood in spite of in case you fall on your face, you're nevertheless shifting forward the will of God will in no way take you to the place the grace of God won't preserve you
2016-11-27 23:37:12 · answer #2 · answered by incera 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I'm not an "English expert," but thought I might help...
Nonetheless, I had a life-changing experience, which I believe was substantial in value.
or
Nonetheless, I had a life-altering experience, which I believe was was substantial in value.
or
Nonetheless, I had an experience that shifted my perspective on life immensely.
hope that helps! good luck.
2006-10-11 14:50:48 · answer #3 · answered by Just another nickname 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Nevertheless, my experience was life-changing.
2006-10-11 14:49:42 · answer #4 · answered by mighty_power7 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Which has , enhanced my, perspective view of what Life, is truly about.
hope this helps.
2006-10-11 14:51:52 · answer #5 · answered by lytesdelite 5 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Pick the best one,and let us know how you did
2006-10-11 14:46:56 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
My life was altered dramatically by_____.
2006-10-11 14:51:38 · answer #7 · answered by brattybard 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
"When I was ___(age)___ something occured that changed my life forever." Then tell them about it.
2006-10-11 14:48:05 · answer #8 · answered by Cathryn E. 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
I had an epiphany.
2006-10-11 14:53:36 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
"TURNING POINT"
2006-10-11 14:49:37 · answer #10 · answered by ♥ Mz Diettequila ♥ 5 · 0⤊ 1⤋