To the first time that I kissed you, till the last kissed that we shared, it will remain on my lips till I see you again. The warm soft touch, lips slightly apart, the hot breath that escaped, I'll never forget.
2006-10-11 13:33:36 · 10 answers · asked by ◙Blue-Eyed♥Red-Headed♥Bella◙ 4 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Other - Entertainment
So expressively written, you can actually feel it.
2006-10-11 13:43:41 · answer #1 · answered by mickeypalyola 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think that was very nice,and you put alot of thought into it.Keep at it you have you future right in front of you and don't even know it.And the words are so romantic and breath taking,I'm going to show this to my husband,and tell him that it it people out here who still have talent.
2006-10-11 20:37:44 · answer #2 · answered by Sister Queen Mama 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wow! I"M sorry for HIS loss!! Next time b-4 you let one go try saying that to them. If they have ANY feelings 4 you they WILL take another look at whats happening. Nice Job.
2006-10-11 20:39:43 · answer #3 · answered by larry h 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Nice!
2006-10-11 20:38:24 · answer #4 · answered by Mary 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Nicely written, I hope you plan on writing more. You did that well.
2006-10-11 20:35:49 · answer #5 · answered by Sue Chef 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sounds like you have love on the mind :)
2006-10-11 20:35:52 · answer #6 · answered by brattybard 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Good one! Very romantic with out being gross.
2006-10-11 20:37:28 · answer #7 · answered by snowflake 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think it's kinda cliche sorry
2006-10-11 20:42:10 · answer #8 · answered by Impavidus 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
how nice.....very romantic!!! and i can tell that you are very young also...keep on writing sweetie!!!
2006-10-11 20:42:17 · answer #9 · answered by Adele 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Thats really well done!!! I think it's beautiful! Thanks for sharing it!
2006-10-11 20:34:49 · answer #10 · answered by Nicky 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋