a poem about frendship, is it ok or not?

Question

FAREWELL

TIME HAS GONE SO FAST
AND I THOUGHT THIS WOULD LAST
IF ONLY I CAN STOP THE TICKING
THEN I WOULD, SO YOU’LL NOT BE LEAVING

IT’S BEEN ONLY MONTHS, BUT FOR ME IT’S ETERNITY
THIS FRIENDSHIP THAT WE HAVE, I WISH FOR ITS CONTINUITY
THE LAUGHS AND WEEPINGS, THE GRIEF AND BLISS
ARE THE PRECIOUS THINGS THAT I WILL MISS

I’LL NEVER REGRET TAKING THIS PATH WITH YOU
AND I WILL NOT THINK TWICE TO START ANEW
I DON’T KNOW IF I CAN SURPASS THIS SADNESS
BUT I WILL FACE TOMORROW AND LIVE LIFE TO THE FULLEST.

SEEMS LIKE YESTERDAY, THAT EACH OF US SAID “HI!”
AND NOW, HERE COMES TODAY, THAT WE MUST SAY “GOODBYE!”
WE MIGHT NOT SEE EACH OTHER AGAIN
BUT GOD KNOWS, THIS IS NOT THE END.

THEN AS SOON AS YOU LEFT ME HERE
THE SUN WAS GONE, AND BIG CLOUDS APPEAR
THE WIND GETS STRONGER AND RAINDROPS START FALLING
FAREWELL…. MY FRIENDS, THANK YOU FOR EVERYTHING.


help me plss...i really dont know if this poem
is good.

Answer 1

I really like it... Did you write it because I would love to use it.

Answer 2

I thought it was one of the BEST poems that I've ever heard in my entire life.