To pursue a career in an organization within the financial services industry that offers professional growth and whereby I can utilize my management skills and enhance experience
2006-10-11 12:09:25 · 5 answers · asked by satish k 1 in Business & Finance ➔ Careers & Employment
of course !
2006-10-11 12:25:45 · answer #1 · answered by carlos 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
First of all objectives should be the first thing that catches their eye yours sounds like a thesauraus, out of a dictionary or copy and pasted off of others. Yes you want to sound intelligent but you have to word things the same way you would speak. Plus HR loves it when your objective is personal. How about... instead of to pursue a career in an organiztion....To continue my career in financial services (saying pursue means you haven't done any of it yet) and instead of using financial services industry use the name of the company. Its more likely that the other person reading it knows that you want to work for that company and not just any financial company (Granted it means changing your resume for every job applied for; but it betters your chance). now with the line"that offers professional growth ( your telling them that you need some polishing and a mentor) instead say """"company"""" that offers room for growth. and last but not least...and whereby I can utililize my managerment skills and enhance experience...instead put "where I can be a part of the management team and be included in the ongoing successes of the company. It makes it more personal but professional and positive at the same time. Companies want to know that you are in it for them ( because there is competition everywhere) GOOD LUCK
2006-10-11 23:46:11 · answer #2 · answered by Jeffry 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋
That's an good one. You can also say.
Seeking an entry level position in the financial management industry with growth and potential advancement.
A position as financial analyst.
Check the internet for career objectives.
Monster, Careerbuilder, hotjobs has great information for sample objectives.
http://www.rileyguide.com
http://www.susanireland.com
2006-10-11 19:13:16 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
If you have a cover letter or you are applying for a specific job, you can leave this out. It is helpful if you are dropping a resume only off at a huge company that would have no idea what kind of job you want.
2006-10-11 19:40:19 · answer #4 · answered by Jackie V 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You answered your own question, which I don't think you asked one?
2006-10-11 19:13:14 · answer #5 · answered by Good Grief 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋