Any thing wrong with this sentence? “The cowardly lion, in the wizard of Ozz, was frightened he would ...?

Question

“The cowardly lion, in the wizard of Ozz, was frightened he would quail in the face of danger.”

Answer 1

You've spelt Oz wrong?

Answer 2

Firstly, it's Oz, 1 z. secondly, it doesn't sound right. I would write it like this....The cowardly lion, from the "Wizard of Oz", would quail in the face of danger when frightened. Hope that helps.

Answer 3

Add a comma after the word "frightened", and after the word "quail". Also, " the wizard of oz", should be written as I have written it, with quotation marks. The lion was in the story, not in the wizard.

Answer 4

"The Wizard of Oz" should be capitalized and written in bold (or underlined), because it is the name of a book.

"Cowardly Lion" should be capitalized, because it is a proper name.

You might want to insert "that" between "frightened" and "he", just to make the sentence more clear.

And really, you probably ought to say "afraid", rather than "frightened". People usually say "I'm afraid that..." rather than "I'm frightened that...", but we're talking usage, rather than the actual definition of the word.

Otherwise, it makes perfect sense.

Answer 5

a million. that's 2 sentences, not a million. 2. Duck should not be capitalized 3. "Quacked" should not be in citation marks 4. Echos are quieter than the unique noise, which potential they are able to't shuttle farther than the unique noise, so asserting that it echoed back to the duck is not sensible. 5. "it" is a pronoun devoid of antecedent. We comprehend "it" to be the quack, yet "quacked" is used as a verb, and an antecedent must be a noun. 6. There are 6 issues incorrect, not 3

Answer 6

Oz is spelled with just one Z.

Answer 7

Oz is spelled wrong

Answer 8

check your first posting
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