We once were very good friends. Laughing and talking and telling secrets. then one day you were gone. I couldent find you. I would call out your name. No answer. I would sit and crie and crie for many hours and then i finally realized......you werent coming back.....i will always miss you. My dear friend
2006-10-10 12:01:09 · 10 answers · asked by runfree925 2 in Family & Relationships ➔ Friends
Yes it is good.
Poems, to me, are meant to touch us emotionally. Yours does.
It could be dressed up some, but it works well as is.
2006-10-10 12:22:15 · answer #1 · answered by deepndswamps 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Beautiful
2006-10-10 19:04:11 · answer #2 · answered by Element 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
This is really not a poem, this is your feeling about someone that was once in your life that you loved dearly but then all of a sudden he walks out your life and left you in an emotional stage.
2006-10-10 19:06:57 · answer #3 · answered by BabyGirl 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I am a writer and that was good not something that I would not trash you should try and write more its a good way to let out pain
2006-10-10 19:10:13 · answer #4 · answered by Ela J Pete 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
well, different people have different point of views, so some people may not like it. personally, i like that poem. it has a deep meaning to it.
2006-10-10 19:02:56 · answer #5 · answered by sportzgurl 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it's nice. it's different from the poems I write but I like it
2006-10-10 19:05:04 · answer #6 · answered by nichelle b 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i love it!
(isn't it spelled "cry" not crie?)
2006-10-10 19:07:34 · answer #7 · answered by Frank 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I really like it!!
omg I can
relate to it : /
2006-10-10 19:09:21 · answer #8 · answered by Cindyyy<3 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its good but i think you can touch it up a little
2006-10-10 19:03:36 · answer #9 · answered by Kathy 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sounds GREAT to me :)
2006-10-10 19:03:26 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋