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At the top of mountain and at the bottom of the sea
Searched high and low for and answer, for someone to rescue me
Ran up the stairs and tumbled down to see
If anyone cared to run over and save me

I drank the devil‘s blood and mixed it with a gallon of Gin
To see if someone would be waiting with aspirin at the end
Floated down the river to reach the fall
Hoping that a good man would name call

I walked a million miles around the world
Just to see if anyone knew I was missing
Cut myself into a thousand pieces and dropped them all over the earth
To see if anyone even noticed it was sprinkling

Out of breath crying ,bleeding ,and afraid a thought hit me
Found out what I was searching for was always with me

So I slammed my bedroom door plopped on my bed and started to snore

2006-10-10 11:36:55 · 8 answers · asked by Missbribri 5 in Arts & Humanities Philosophy

I just wrote this in a matter of min so its not perfect..

2006-10-10 11:48:42 · update #1

if you come here to critisize for 2 point I feel for you ..

2006-10-10 11:50:07 · update #2

8 answers

It seems quite a complicated image which you have painted. However, allow me to take a stab at it.
Society is marching foreword in a trance while you are trying to
wake it up from its stupor.
Looking, you search for a sign of life and individuality.
Also society has become numb to the sufferings of others and finally you become disheartened and give up on society.
Sorry...this is th best I could do.

2006-10-10 11:52:46 · answer #1 · answered by You Ask & I Answer!!! 4 · 0 0

You want someone to notice or pay some attention to you. You feel very sad and betrayed that there is no one there. You finally realized that you are self-sufficient and peace of mind finally set in.

You were in a state of helplessness and you truly believed that your salvation depended upon someone's concern for you. Your pain is evident and I can hear your screaming of help. I wish I can catch you as you fall.

You've woken from the darkness an this has brought you some long deserved slumber.

2006-10-10 18:46:33 · answer #2 · answered by *Ginelle* 3 · 1 0

Your poem suggests that you are looking for an answer to your burning problems in life. You tried to look around for the answer but you cannot find. You searched all the corners of the world but still nowhere it is to be found. You came to the point of exhaustion and went home. You were surprised that the truth that you were searching is in your home, within yourself.

2006-10-10 20:44:18 · answer #3 · answered by ol's one 3 · 0 0

It sounds like you found peace. A little constructive criticism though. It went on and on then abruptly ended. Balance is important in prose.

2006-10-10 21:28:34 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

Those are all good answers... What come to my mind is You were Looking for God, and realized that God is everwhere, and that he does care.
CyberNara

2006-10-10 19:22:08 · answer #5 · answered by Joe K 6 · 1 0

I wish I could write like you..

2006-10-10 21:14:47 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

So i see you need help with your homework

2006-10-10 18:44:42 · answer #7 · answered by beauty 4 · 0 1

its really good. i cant even write that good!!!

2006-10-10 18:48:12 · answer #8 · answered by runfree925 2 · 0 1

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