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Ok i have too write one in the style of;Juxtaposes past and present. The Prof asked us; *"Be careful that you don’t focus too much attention on yourself. You are, however, a part of the process. Just don’t begin every sentence with the focus on you—“I.” That would weaken your writing and make it oh-so bad and self-absorbed"*

2006-10-09 10:49:32 · 2 answers · asked by ncgd 1 in Education & Reference Homework Help

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Example of sentences I would use:
Going to see the rest of the family was often the greatest activity, playing with the cousins was always a lot of fun! Reading was good to make the time pass since money was rare and going to camp was not an option. Fortunately, we had a small campground were we would have our tent and many family members would join us. The lake was warm during the hot summer days but would get colder during the night. Jumping in the cold water early in the morning is a good way to wake up!

2006-10-09 10:59:29 · answer #1 · answered by Mel 5 · 0 0

you can always try describing the situations. If you were to say "the landscape was this...the scenery...the smells were like that, they looked like this. Mary laughed when Tom snorted" things like that...you are still relating your experience, just without "I" being in there too much.

Good luck.

2006-10-09 10:55:00 · answer #2 · answered by imhalf_the_sourgirl_iused_tobe 5 · 0 0

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