i am trying to finalize a thank you letter for an interview i had. I need help re-wording this paragraph -?

Question

I was especially impressed with the immediate follow-up communication a perspective traveler or existing traveler receives after contacting Hop-A-Jet. My organizational and communication skills are among my strongest attributes. I feel my experience interacting with public officials, ranging from US Senators as well as Congressmen down to the State or Local level would enable me to make a strong contribution in continuing the success of ________(company name will be here)

Answer 1

it's "prospective" not perspective

I like it overall, I think you just need to add some flow.

Before the second sentence try "This focus on service is reflected in my organizational and communication skills - they are among my strongest attributes."

I'm not certain what the position is, so I don't know about the emphasis of dealing with public officials. You may broaden it to dealing with the general public? (Pet Peeve: take out "I feel" - the people hiring don't care how you feel, they want to know how your experience fits with this position.)

It sounds really good.

Best of luck!!!

Answer 2

I was particularly impressed with the customer service communications in your organization, most notably, the immediate follow-up with clients, and my organziational and communication skills would be quite beneficial in this regard.

My experience interacting with public officials....would also enable me to make a strong contribution to ????.