Everybody has their vulnerabilities
The charisma in your eyes
So mystifying that's mine
Gosh i wish i could keep about this
But real obligations
Dissipate,Deprecate me so righteously
Isn't it dispiriting
Yeah i know
Only in my head does it toil
The thoughts of what i want it to be
2006-10-07 18:39:35 · 8 answers · asked by Moanika 6 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
Haiku? I know there's another name for it.....:) Good Job
2006-10-07 19:03:26 · answer #1 · answered by a_chickaboom02 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
For me a poem has to have rhythm. It would not inevitably would desire to rhyme whether it needs to hit my thoughts. i think of readability of expression is significant besides. i do no longer desire to 2d wager what i'm examining approximately. I continuously seem for what I term "poetic gemstones"contained in the text cloth.
2016-10-02 01:48:44 · answer #2 · answered by lashbrook 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Keep this up and you can publish a book of your own work
2006-10-07 18:44:03 · answer #3 · answered by GiGi 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Cool.
2006-10-07 18:41:16 · answer #4 · answered by Nicky 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Are u going to put it to music?
2006-10-09 10:44:58 · answer #5 · answered by Giggly Giraffe 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
thats a good one
2006-10-07 20:08:29 · answer #6 · answered by Yvonne 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
nicely written
2006-10-07 18:40:43 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
good
2006-10-07 18:42:07 · answer #8 · answered by 2"CUTE"2B30 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋