Your soul is like the vastest sea
And mine a darting fish:
I lose myself within your love;
I live within your heart.
I breathe your love: it is my air,
My element, my world.
I know no other ambiance;
I have no other dream.
I know there is outside your love
A world of rocks and sand;
And I could live there, too, but oh!
How poor and thin each breath!
How rich my world, how beautiful,
Alive within your love,
Each moment filled with dancing light
Refracted through your eyes!
2006-10-07 18:26:05 · 15 answers · asked by raj the secret 2 in Family & Relationships ➔ Friends
wow that is so romantic...do you really mean it?
2006-10-07 18:28:13 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
It was really fantabulous. Did you write by yourself? Anyway give to her and win her love . All the best.
2006-10-08 03:16:46 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
That is really sweet.. You are very poetic.. You should enter a poety contest, I bet that u would deffinately win..
2006-10-08 01:39:40 · answer #3 · answered by Dont Ask 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
www.somethingawful.com
Go there, join, go the creativity forums and get some advice on writing poetry.
2006-10-08 01:28:46 · answer #4 · answered by The Lobe 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Beautiful.
Makes the soul fly high.
2006-10-08 01:32:41 · answer #5 · answered by DREENA 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
So who knew "darting fish" could get girls so mushy?
2006-10-08 01:32:07 · answer #6 · answered by You'll Never Outfox the Fox 5 · 2⤊ 0⤋
she is shooting a video with 50cents she a video girl(smile ) good luck
2006-10-08 01:30:26 · answer #7 · answered by reddiwhip2004 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
WOW!!! She must really be special! You should give that to her!
2006-10-08 01:30:03 · answer #8 · answered by Social_D 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Bravo! i hope you have someone to give this to...lucky gal.
2006-10-08 01:29:54 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
Oh babe.I am right here
2006-10-08 01:28:44 · answer #10 · answered by Moanika 6 · 0⤊ 1⤋
www.learnpoetry.com
GO THERE
2006-10-08 01:32:06 · answer #11 · answered by class of 2010!!! rock on 2 · 2⤊ 0⤋