She paints a mask on her face
Not a single patch of skin has left a trace
She marked her lips crimson red
Her hair is bundled up upon her head
She puts on her midnight dress
Inside she’s all a mess
She bites her tongue
Cause she doesn’t belong
She hides
And her world collides
All her lies
Rage the tears inside
She has lost her soul
She has no control
She paints that mask on her face
Not a single ounce of innocence has left a trace.
She lost her place
And the past cannot be erased
She is lost in a sea of black
Her heart has turned into ice
She paints a mask on her face
To hide the fact that she has not one place.
2006-10-07 17:27:11 · 3 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
I like it.
I am something of an amateur poet, too. And I really like yours
only one problem
She is lost in a sea of black
Her heart has turned into ice
doesnt reall rhyme
She is lost in a sea of black
her heart has turned to brack
2006-10-07 17:36:30 · answer #1 · answered by devinthedragon 5 · 1⤊ 1⤋
I really like it. I like the idea that you wrote it and that people will read it. I like the idea that it might effect girls to see more deeply into themselves and the masks they put on for society when society is twisting them into presenting themselves to be made up dollies instead of the people of depth and quality that you have displayed in tapping your soul with this poem.
2006-10-07 18:03:37 · answer #2 · answered by honorbright24 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Good. In a sad way..
Hope she gets her groove back ♥
2006-10-07 17:35:10 · answer #3 · answered by * Deep Thought * 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋