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She paints a mask on her face

Not a single patch of skin has left a trace

She marked her lips crimson red

Her hair is bundled up upon her head

She puts on her midnight dress

Inside she’s all a mess

She bites her tongue

Cause she doesn’t belong

She hides

And her world collides

All her lies

Rage the tears inside

She has lost her soul

She has no control

She paints that mask on her face

Not a single ounce of innocence has left a trace.

She lost her place

And the past cannot be erased

She is lost in a sea of black

Her heart has turned into ice

She paints a mask on her face

To hide the fact that she has not one place.

2006-10-07 17:27:11 · 3 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities Other - Arts & Humanities

3 answers

I like it.

I am something of an amateur poet, too. And I really like yours


only one problem

She is lost in a sea of black
Her heart has turned into ice


doesnt reall rhyme

She is lost in a sea of black
her heart has turned to brack

2006-10-07 17:36:30 · answer #1 · answered by devinthedragon 5 · 1 1

I really like it. I like the idea that you wrote it and that people will read it. I like the idea that it might effect girls to see more deeply into themselves and the masks they put on for society when society is twisting them into presenting themselves to be made up dollies instead of the people of depth and quality that you have displayed in tapping your soul with this poem.

2006-10-07 18:03:37 · answer #2 · answered by honorbright24 3 · 0 0

Good. In a sad way..
Hope she gets her groove back ♥

2006-10-07 17:35:10 · answer #3 · answered by * Deep Thought * 4 · 0 0

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