Touches so soft...
Pressing,
Wanting.
Feeling.
Needing.
Demanding.
Words...
Whispered.
In the husky deep voices of boys.
Words that could only please a girl.
A silly girl.
Who had just escaped.
The sweet bounds of childhood .
And entered the hell.
Of adolescence.
Words...
Sweet.
Pleasing.
Fulfilling.
Delighting.
Meaningful.
To a young girl’s mind.
Glances...
Filled with lust.
Mystery.
Wanting.
Longing.
Yearning.
Stolen by me.
And taken of me..
Thoughts and intentions...
Unknown by me.
Passing.
Undetected.
Alien.
Strange.
To the my simple mind.
I refined it and tried to make it a little better... :-)
2006-10-07 14:43:34 · 11 answers · asked by susannah 1 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
That's really great. Your a good writer.
2006-10-07 14:55:04 · answer #1 · answered by ▒Яenée▒ 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Descriptive
2006-10-07 14:58:41 · answer #2 · answered by Apollo 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Really coooooooooool
2006-10-07 14:56:17 · answer #3 · answered by G 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sweetheart your heading for trouble.
2006-10-07 14:47:40 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
sounds pretty good, but i would change the format.
2006-10-07 14:46:47 · answer #5 · answered by Nikki 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
I like it!
2006-10-07 14:47:38 · answer #6 · answered by kayboff 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
u r pretty intelligent
2006-10-07 14:49:00 · answer #7 · answered by rav 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋
(smiles) I like it alot
2006-10-07 14:48:44 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
REALLY GOOD KEEP IT UP
2006-10-07 14:51:56 · answer #9 · answered by vampire lover 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
sorry, i don't think much of it.
2006-10-07 14:50:47 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋