Our Children
Our Children today are being abused.
Growing up in the world scared and confused.
Living in a home with many problems,
Talk to someone and get help to solve them.
Many are being raised without a dad,
And mothers grieve that is why they're bad.
Our Children today need a guiding light.
Tell them the difference from wrong and right.
Without no supervision in a child’s life,
They're lives end early to a gun or knife.
That's not the way no child should go.
All it takes is to talk so then they know.
Think how you want your child to be raised.
As an adult making at least minimum wage?
Or a young-minded thug,
Depending on a career out of selling drugs?
Every generation is different from the next.
Be logic and don't assume you have the best.
2006-10-07 14:05:49 · 9 answers · asked by Karramel 1 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Other - Entertainment
i really like it, a lot of people could learn from this, share your poetry its wonderful
2006-10-07 14:14:14 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
its a good poem something that came to mind right watching danger reading chaos something we already know but have you ever experienced the chaos? experienced true emotions?
A poem is something between Yin and Yang or as the spiritualist would say " Yin the light and Yang the shadows withouth these we are incomplete" a poem is the same like happiness, sorrows, joy, destruction. poems are the same if you noticed
your poem is inward of shadows of Yang telling us the facts about sorrows.
I know this because i had sorrows in my life and somewhat of happiness i express those emotions to my poems
2006-10-07 14:23:03 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Thats really good poetry!! It all flowed really well. It sounds like it could be turned into a rap song...
2006-10-07 14:17:04 · answer #3 · answered by Jade64 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's so good. I think it's very lyrical and can even be made into a song. Wonderful effort!!!
2006-10-07 14:09:16 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
VERY good. And truthful, too. You made alot of good points.
2006-10-07 14:13:38 · answer #5 · answered by IthinkFramptonisstillahottie 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i think it is soo awesome u should totally share it with ppl u know and everyone else too!!
2006-10-07 14:25:30 · answer #6 · answered by Kimepele 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I really like your poem.
2006-10-07 14:11:27 · answer #7 · answered by Bubbles 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's good.
2006-10-07 14:10:30 · answer #8 · answered by newstudent06 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
thats whats up :-)
2006-10-07 14:14:05 · answer #9 · answered by stargurl_5887 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋