Is it love?
I ask myself
over and over again
Can it really be love?
The one simple thing
that everyone wants...
can i truly have that?
Or am I in the middle of a game
that life has set out for me
to test me
through these heartless trials
to warn me of the dangers
of this wonderful feeling called love
But in a moment
can it really all be gone?
Can i have lost this feeling called love?
The warmth of your smile
and the taste of your lips...
can it really be gone?
Is life that cruel to do this to us,
to take away this lovely feeling,
Then i begin to think,
was it really that glorious?
Or was I making it
what I wanted it to be...
romantic...
whistful...
and strong?
I begin to think how much i miss you...
I bleed and cry for you...
The sound of your voice
is longing to my ears
The taste of your kiss
is needed on my lips...
I love you...
need you...
miss you...
Its all so clear now.
It was Love,
It is Love.
Then in the darkness,
you emerge from the fog.
Tears on your cheeks...
And you tell me,
It was not meant to be.
2006-10-07 13:21:56 · 9 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
I liked it- it was simple yet had deep emotion like a wave washing the sand.
2006-10-07 13:52:13 · answer #1 · answered by LostInTheCrowd 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i think you are in the wrong -- section or web site. you should publish your nice poem a) to your lover b) to a site that publishes poems c) you should e-mail it to your friends etc. d) to test it on question and answer here --is a loss of your time and ours -- despite your good intentions. I am sure you get the message -- and good luck with your poem and love too. you need them both.
2006-10-07 13:27:09 · answer #2 · answered by s t 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think you have `got it bad` Although that sounds to me like a "wacky backy" song. In any case, I am sure that it really is not meant to be!
2006-10-07 13:27:44 · answer #3 · answered by Social Science Lady 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think , you are ey good girl. I kiss from México,
2006-10-07 13:32:18 · answer #4 · answered by lama3513 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
One thing: I wouldn't buy the book.
2006-10-07 13:29:16 · answer #5 · answered by mrquestion 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
wow... yeah, that's good! would've wanted to know WHY he said it's not meant to be, but hey! it's good the way it is too :)
2006-10-07 13:30:54 · answer #6 · answered by High On Life 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
nice break up poem
2006-10-07 13:29:24 · answer #7 · answered by starlove2 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
good work, but love is to be for any one how would let it in their life and soul........
2006-10-07 13:26:28 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
love is not a circumstance, it is a choice.
2006-10-07 13:27:15 · answer #9 · answered by Rico Toasterman JPA 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋