Touches so soft,
But at times pressing,
Wanting.
Feeling.
Needing.
Demanding.
Words...
Whispered...
In the husky deep voices of teenage boys
Words that could only please a girl,
A silly girl
Who had just escaped
The sweet bounds of childhood
And entered the hell
Of adolescence.
Words...
Sweet.
Pleasing.
Fulfilling.
Delighting.
With meanings behind them...
By the mind of a young twelve year old girl.
Glances...
Filled with lust.
Mystery.
Wanting.
Longing.
Yearning.
Hidden and lost.
In the darkness of their eyes.
Glances...
Stolen by me.
And taken of me..
Thoughts and intentions...
Unknown by me.
Passed under my radar.
Undetected.
Alien.
Strange.
To the my simple mind..
All I wanted...
All I needed...
All I craved...
Was attention.
A hug here.
A hug there.
A hug whore.
Small arms wrapped around...
Around the shoulders of many boys.
My hands clasping each other.
Feeling the hardness of their chests.
The curve of bone...
Their muscular backs and shoulders.
Their warmth...
Feeling a strange happiness fill me.
Like I was filled.
Like I was wanted.
Like I was needed.
2006-10-07 12:34:16 · 13 answers · asked by susannah 1 in Pregnancy & Parenting ➔ Adolescent
I did not steal it. I just thought of it...
2006-10-07 12:43:50 · update #1
is this supposta be a poem because it sounds like it, certain parts any way but it is way to long to be a real poem. i liked it though it was very descriptive and you could imagine the whole thing as if you were their. i would classify it as a letter of feelings or or something else.
2006-10-07 13:01:17 · answer #1 · answered by malinda 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
not to bad i really like the part about the placement of defibrillator paddles on or withing 5 inches of the generator 'battery' of an implanted automatic defibrillator or pacemaker can damage or disable the generator. great point and put to poetry great work
you really have some talents there kid-o
2006-10-07 19:39:12 · answer #2 · answered by k_b_355 2 · 0⤊ 2⤋
I don't like.
You should look at books with poems and see how they work I'm not telling you to plagiarize.
2006-10-08 08:46:01 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think you should stop stealing poems off the internet and claiming it as your own.
2006-10-07 19:43:16 · answer #4 · answered by Ashanofy Frederick Dixon 3 · 0⤊ 2⤋
that stinks! as a poet i think that you need to take lessons, and fast. this is a really lame poem if you can call it that. take advice and stop writing while you are ahead.
2006-10-07 19:44:01 · answer #5 · answered by fatiima 5 · 0⤊ 2⤋
Amazing that describes exactly how i feel
2006-10-07 20:19:01 · answer #6 · answered by mrs. Tink 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Blah blah blah blah blah!
2006-10-07 20:33:00 · answer #7 · answered by Gone fishin' 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
actually, i think its too long.....cut it down a little and stick with a poem format (haiku, freestyle, etc.)
2006-10-07 19:41:32 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 1⤋
wow, very, deep. did you write that? its true to many people
2006-10-07 19:36:28 · answer #9 · answered by Des'ree is how to spell my n 3 · 1⤊ 1⤋
That is REALLY good,I loved it!
2006-10-07 22:41:36 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋