Touches so soft,
But at times pressing,
Wanting.
Feeling.
Needing.
Demanding.
Words...
Whispered...
In the husky deep voices of teenage boys
Words that could only please a girl,
A silly girl
Who had just escaped
The sweet bounds of childhood
And entered the hell
Of adolescence.
Words...
Sweet.
Pleasing.
Fulfilling.
Delighting.
With meanings behind them...
By the mind of a young twelve year old girl.
Glances...
Filled with lust.
Mystery.
Wanting.
Longing.
Yearning.
Hidden and lost.
In the darkness of their eyes.
Glances...
Stolen by me.
And taken of me..
Thoughts and intentions...
Unknown by me.
Passed under my radar.
Undetected.
Alien.
Strange.
To the my simple mind..
All I wanted...
All I needed...
All I craved...
Was attention.
A hug here.
A hug there.
A hug whore.
Small arms wrapped around...
Around the shoulders of many boys.
My hands clasping each other.
Feeling the hardness of their chests.
The curve of bone...
Their muscular backs and shoulders.
Their warmth...
Feeling a strange happiness fill me.
Like I was filled.
Like I was wanted.
Like I was needed.
2006-10-07 12:25:10 · 14 answers · asked by susannah 1 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
I think it's great poetry. Puts you in the mind of what it's like to be an adolescent growing up having different feelings.
2006-10-07 12:27:49 · answer #1 · answered by Nico 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Bunch of words listed, synonyms strung together. No passion.
2006-10-07 19:26:56 · answer #2 · answered by troyboy 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You should submit this into a poetry contest. You might win.
2006-10-07 19:29:34 · answer #3 · answered by daisha_mc 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Damn thats good! Publish it on poetry.com I hope you dont min i printed it to read again aloud.
2006-10-07 19:28:02 · answer #4 · answered by Agnon L 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's kewl, makes me think of the first time I had sex.
2006-10-07 19:28:30 · answer #5 · answered by lilmama 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
waaaaaaaaaay too long, and clearly by someone with not much experience.
2006-10-07 19:29:42 · answer #6 · answered by Baby'sMom 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It is to list like ...
2006-10-07 19:26:54 · answer #7 · answered by aaron 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
that your longing for a boyfriend
2006-10-07 19:32:12 · answer #8 · answered by annie 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Ahhh...my first time and also my first gangbang....wonderful!!
2006-10-07 19:27:31 · answer #9 · answered by fxbeto 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think you're in love.
It's lovely.
2006-10-07 19:26:44 · answer #10 · answered by Yellowstonedogs 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋