8th chapter. here are the choices
A) the return of friends
B) The long return
C) The waiting of returning friends
2006-10-07 04:48:03 · 4 answers · asked by ~*~Cars~*~ 2 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
I would go with B) The Long Return. It sounds mysterious. It would make people wonder what return, who's returning and why did it take so long for whatever it is to return. In order to get answers, they would have to read.
2006-10-07 10:43:42 · answer #1 · answered by zesty4pie 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
A chapter title should be as short and as succinct as possible. It needs to create a hook to grab the reader's attention and drag them into the next chapter.
Return is your power word here and the word alone creates questions the reader will want to answer.
- Why does someone return?
- Who is returning?
- What are they returning for?
- When are they returning?
- Where are they returning to?
I would suggest D) Return
2006-10-07 05:33:30 · answer #2 · answered by Cowboy Logic 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
B the long return, it sounds intriguing.
2006-10-07 05:20:16 · answer #3 · answered by Loved By Someone Above 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I'd go with A. It's simple and to the point. The other two make it sound (to me) as if you're trying too hard to sound enigmatic, but they're strange grammatically and sound uselessly flourished.
2006-10-07 05:11:57 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋