i need help on english paper?

Question

i am a college student in china . a few days ago i done a poor job in my english class so i cant aford other one . now i just finished my paper about a tanslation work , would anyone like to polish my paper before i hand it to my teacher . many thanks . the followin is my paper :
Chengtian airport is a gate of Tokyo in sky that situated in Qianye city and it is 60 kilometers away from center of tokyo.From the very first flight took off in 1978 to 2004, Chengtian has a total passenger of nearly 500 milions.

There are two waiting halls in Chengtian airport. Getting on board the flights to china at NO:2 waiting hall .Some 10 airlines connect Chengtian airport with Beijing, Shanghai, Xi'an Dalian and so on and more than 50 liners head to these cities each day .
The major means of transportion between Chengtian airpor with the center of Tokyo are bus ,car ,and tramway . By express tramway ,it takes almost 1 hour to be Tokyo . The highway to Tokyo is good developed , it will be there in

nealy 1hour by car, but the trafic jam of Tokyo is badly sometimes it will spend more than 3 hours

Answer 1

Chengtian Airport is a gate of Tokyo in the sky that is situated in Qianye city and it is 60 kilometers away from center of Tokyo. From the very first flight that took off in 1978 to 2004, Chengtian has a total number of passengers nearly in the 500 millions.

There are two waiting halls in Chengtian Airport. Getting on board the flights to China at NO. 2 waiting hall. About 10 airlines connect Chengtian Airport with Beijing, Shanghai, Xi'an, Dalian and so on. More than 50 liners head to these cities each day.
The major means transportion between Chengtian Airport with the center of Tokyo are bus, car, and tramway. By express tramway, it takes almost one hour to Tokyo. The highway to Tokyo is well developed, and it will take about one hour, but if there is a traffic jam it might take about three hours.

Answer 2

Chengtian airport is a gate of Tokyo in the sky. It is situated in Qianye city and it is 60 kilometres away from centre of Tokyo. Chengtian's very first flight took off in 1978 and by 2004 it had a passenger total of nearly 500 million.

There are two waiting halls in Chengtian airport. Flights to China leave from waiting hall number two. Approximately ten airlines connect to Chengtian airport from cities such as Beijing, Shanghai, Xi'an Dalian and more. More than 50 flights depart from here on a daily basis.

The major means of transportation between Chengtian and the centre of Tokyo are bus, car, and tramway. Using the express tramway it takes almost one hour from Tokyo. The highway from Tokyo is well developed and also takes nearly an hour though with bad traffic it can take more than three.

Answer 3

I'll try to help.
"Chengtian Airport is a gateway to Tokyo by the sky. . It is situated in Qianye City, 60 kilometers from the center of Tokyo.
A total of 500millions passengers had passed through Chengtian Airport since the first flight in 1978, until 2004.

There are two departure halls in Chengtian Airport. Flights to China leave from no. 2 departure hall. There are 10 airlines connecting Chengtian Airport with Beijing, Shangai, Xián Dalian and others, with more than 50 flights departing for these cities each day.
The major means of transport between Chengtian Airport & and the center of Tokyo are bus, car & tramway. It takes almost 1 hour to travel to Tokyo. The highway to Tokyo is well-developed. It could take as little as 1 hour by car but, the Tokyo traffic is so heavy, it sometimes takes more than 3 hours."

Answer 4

Chengtian airport is a gate of Tokyo in the sky. It is situated in Qianye city and is 60 kilometers from the center of Tokyo. Since the first flight in 1978 until 2004, Chengtian has had a total of nearly 500 million passengers.
There are 2 waiting areas in Chengtian airport. The flights to China are located in waiting area #2. Approximately 10 airlines connect Chengtian airport with Beijing, Shanghai, Xi'an Dalian and others.
More than 50 planes head to these cities each day.
The major means of transportation between Chengtian airport and the center of Tokyo are bus, car or tram. The tram is about a 1 hour ride. The highway to Tokyo is well developed.

hope that helps. good luck. m

Answer 5

Well, I can say that work on your grammar and try to focus on what you are writing. But at first, try to work on some of the basic grammatical skills.