I came to throw 'bows
pimp out all the whores
and get paid .... then get laid by the same whores I pimped out
and have them pay me to make'em cuuum
like Don Juan ... I am the One ... the only one ... the king of the castle ... witout a hassle; I raise the roof and make you party with disregard for all authority.
2006-10-06 05:10:48 · 22 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
good job i liked it
2006-10-06 05:12:56 · answer #1 · answered by lori b 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Well, although it is difficult to tell if someone can really rap by only reading words their words, it seems that the rap career is not for you. For instance, your words do not rhyme..."i came to throw bowes....pimp out all the whores" The words bowes and whores don't rhyme. Maybe if you used "hoe" instead of "whores" that would be better. But you still have alot of work to do.
I'm a rapper....and here is a verse i wrote:
i can't take it
i wanna be free
free to do me
and just spread my wings-
cuz things ain't what they used to be
frustration got me pacin'
and i can't hardly think.
There's more..but you get my drift.
2006-10-06 12:18:49 · answer #2 · answered by janeywb 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Maybe it'd be better to use you intelligence and artistic skills to rap about cool or positive things rather than prostitiution
2006-10-06 12:14:27 · answer #3 · answered by frownee 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Sorry to say (and this is REALLY bad) but Kevin Federline has better rap skills than you do.
2006-10-06 12:12:56 · answer #4 · answered by RACQUEL 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
tj get off the internet
white rappers arent cool
fag
gay
****
piss
****
poop
******
douch
poopersnapper
2006-10-06 12:12:32 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yes,,, Baby Records is waiting for you to signed...
2006-10-06 12:12:52 · answer #6 · answered by BATISTA 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Not very tight young thug.
2006-10-06 12:12:29 · answer #7 · answered by horrorfan 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I'm a feminist..just realized that now
2006-10-06 12:13:07 · answer #8 · answered by Don't get me started 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Stick to your day job.
2006-10-06 12:12:14 · answer #9 · answered by Special nobody 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Just kill yourself, it will be less painful in the long run!
2006-10-06 12:12:35 · answer #10 · answered by xxstickygreenzxx 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋