Im a 15 year old white kid who needs help becoming a better rapper. im working on a couple of projects.
I need to kno who to write good punch lines, what are they and stuff like that....i need advice or tips from people who actually rap, and i dont need ppl to tell me to quit cuz im not so save it.
All i need is advice on how to improve my writting and how to write good punch lines. heres the link where i posted my samples.
http://ca.answers.yahoo.com/question/index;_ylt=Ah6vIKpGgNhTbKByNIgEJhLAFQx.?qid=20061004163715AAQvT9H
2006-10-05 08:00:29 · 2 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
Your rhymes don't flow man. They rhyme, but if you actually try put em' to a beat, there will be all kinds of pauses and dragging out of words. Before you start rapping about actual things, try freestyle writing. Make sure you keep the flow going, it doesn't matter if the words make no sense. E-mail me man, I could do a verse for you or something.
2006-10-06 06:45:24 · answer #1 · answered by Wocka wocka 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
U need variety...whatz up wit da riotin'?... Ur just a teen in society, nah mean?...U wanna b hard core u gotta bring da thunda stormz...Be true, d0 u...stop talkin' about da fightz n u'll b aiight...U wanna be big u gotta bring it 2 higher heightz...Dedication and time, you gotta make it ur life...Punch lines are 1 line rhymez dat blow peoplez mindz...Like ur linez only speak 2 my s*it... I (just) put ur face in my behind...My poisionous dartz r like bart'z sling shot...I rip u apart wishin' u neva had a start...Run yo s*#t, everthin' u got...I took what u bought, smokin' ur pot...I'm high wacthin' ur stank *** rot...
2006-10-05 16:11:41 · answer #2 · answered by WWJD: What Would Joker Do? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋