I am the shooting star you see at night
i fight for what i know is right
i dont back down from any challenge
i am not a tiger
nor a lion
i dont give up
or have definence
it is in my blood
its whoi i am
its simply me
you understand!
2006-10-05 00:15:58 · 5 answers · asked by se_rocks 1 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
pretty good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
2006-10-05 00:20:24 · answer #1 · answered by i_luv_new_york_120060 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it, you have disposition for poetry and inspiration. Why don't you read more about metric in poetry, you can find more in the web. any searcher for metric poetry Good luck
2006-10-05 07:35:28 · answer #2 · answered by pelancha 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
the first two lines are really good, but the rest is all crap.
anyways, very good try, keep it up.
2006-10-05 07:25:36 · answer #3 · answered by roby_chillz 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
nice i like it
2006-10-05 07:58:55 · answer #4 · answered by black cat 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its good ...all the best
2006-10-05 07:52:48 · answer #5 · answered by amithaa 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋