Sweet Dreams
I want this girl can’t you see
How much she means to me
And I can’t get her hard as I try
But my feelings for her will never die
I just wish I could get the chance
To take her to one last dance
So I’ll pray now to the man up above
To spend one night with the girl I love
(Chorus)
Many chances I have had
None end good all end bad
But if I could get that one night
I would make everything right
I’d give the world to this girl
Diamonds, clothes, jewelry, and pearls
Do anything to see her smile
To have a chance
I must be in denial
Somehow I passed the test
Asked her out and she said yes
Perfect is how it has to be
If not then she’ll forget about me
Eight p.m. rolls around
I pick her up for a night on the town
Walk up and knock on the door
It opens up and the crowd starts to roar
She’s so beautiful it’s almost painful
Cause I’m in love with an angel
She’s perfect: smart, funny, and kind
I could stare at her till the end of time
(Chorus 2x)
Now it’s time to take her home
Ignore the calls that I get on my phone
Spend as much time with her as I can
Because a chance like this will never happen again
She says what a good time she had
I reply it wasn’t half bad
And in for the kiss I lean
That’s when I wake…
Up from my dream
2006-10-04 16:34:31 · 16 answers · asked by Zach S 1 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
I really like it.
I wish I could have this dream. After my best friend died it is all I wanted was to dance with him one more night. Thank you
2006-10-04 16:42:23 · answer #1 · answered by kerry9477 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
hey tell em all where to go(need directions? i got em memorized). man no-one can tell you how to write but you. and dont forget it. 1 of the best pieces i wrote, i changed to please someone else. the first was better and i lost the original. ps i had some help with the song on the base riff and part of the bridge. but it was impromptu and very similar to yours only it was just a stranger looking in to a lovely persons inner sanctuary or life and its escapes.
no joke, that cheesy song helped me to see my own road because i really didnt want to see it, even if it was(and it was) day-glo yellow. see i havent wrote many lyrics since i was a teen.
It made me feel good to see someone else enjoy themself(nod) as i did with music, even though the method was different. the song was cheezy because "ever written about someone you dont hardly know with an unknown life"
2006-10-04 17:04:33 · answer #2 · answered by l8ntpianist 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like those lyrics plenty. It absolutely appears like some thing I'd concentrate to on account that it is sincere. I can see that it is coming from a painful location. It's lovely. And I love it.
2016-08-29 07:41:52 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sounds aiight ...depends on what type of music we talking rap, pop, country, metal or what but depending on the beat and flow I cld see it being competitive to some of the other stuff thats out now
2006-10-04 16:44:55 · answer #4 · answered by Teapot23 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Nice thoughts but a bit too syrupy for my taste.
It might work with the right music.
2006-10-04 16:43:40 · answer #5 · answered by Warren D 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it but it sounds just a little bit cliched. The story is cool, but just try to make it sound more original.
2006-10-04 16:45:06 · answer #6 · answered by Blueforever 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I would like to hear it to music but i think u did a good job :) Im sure the girl would like it too!
2006-10-04 16:43:44 · answer #7 · answered by bbaabbygiirrl 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Maybe country?
Also, don't worry about the "cut it up, make it shorter and easier to memorize" (other poster) . . . look at Dylan's ballads, they certainly aren't short OR cut up.
2006-10-04 16:39:31 · answer #8 · answered by siobahn 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Its a nice story..Can't say more without hearing the music..
2006-10-04 16:41:03 · answer #9 · answered by babyfox412 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it sounds like one big cliche!! think outside the square a bit dude zzzzzzz
2006-10-04 16:45:13 · answer #10 · answered by that b puss 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋