I met a cool girl today
She didn't notice me
I enjoyed her across the room
And imagined her to be
I met her in my mind
And wished that she could see
Imagining herself
Holding hands with me
Her eyes were bright
Her hair was fair
I tried real hard
Not to stare
We have a moment left in time
When she pierced in my thoughts
And somehow I knew that she knew
That I could like her lots
2006-10-04 15:53:27 · 10 answers · asked by Beano4aReason 4 in Society & Culture ➔ Other - Society & Culture
Let your feelings show
So that she'll know.
That you like her a lot
And she's always in your thoughts.
That you think she's cool
Any possibility of being together,
That you would like to know her better.
For all you know
She felt the same
Holding her feelings, afterall she's a dame :-)
:-)
2006-10-04 16:34:44 · answer #1 · answered by TK 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Actually, that's really creepy. A stranger writing a poem about a girl he never met just creeps me out.
2006-10-04 22:58:28 · answer #2 · answered by i luv teh fishes 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
WOW you wrote that on your own?
that is a very good poem and you have to send it to her!!
if you write every poem like this you should take a class.
2006-10-04 22:57:41 · answer #3 · answered by lion 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I liked the first two stanzas, they're very good, but the last two went downhill
2006-10-04 22:55:43 · answer #4 · answered by ♪ ♫ ☮ NYbron ☮ ♪ ♫ 6 · 2⤊ 0⤋
How sweet. I think it's lovely, you should give her a copy if you get the opportunity.
2006-10-04 22:56:50 · answer #5 · answered by blahblahblah 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
get laid and cut out the romantic bull. Grow some.
2006-10-04 23:12:00 · answer #6 · answered by Gary 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Very nice, put it to music and make a buck!!!
2006-10-04 22:55:54 · answer #7 · answered by kickinupfunf 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
:( the last paragraph sucked !!!! but the rest was soooooooo sweet
2006-10-04 23:00:23 · answer #8 · answered by katiedirl 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think it is nice.
2006-10-04 22:56:23 · answer #9 · answered by candace b 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
sucks.
2006-10-04 22:55:38 · answer #10 · answered by drtyfckr 3 · 2⤊ 2⤋