write this song, please take your time. its go out to my buddy old friend
Haunting
I’m restless
I’m humble, I’m down on my knees
Cause I’m haunting for
Everything that I can’t be
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Long long time, looking back now
Have I done you wrong?
Or what have I done.
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It’s nothing I plan
See a vision on my head
Nothing seems going right,
It’s not that Im complaining
Along come the unexpected
I feel like my motion is playing around
O lord have I been forgotten
Sometimes I feel like,
I’m alone to blame
You know, its time to
Hold on to everything you believe
You know, its time to
Sing a love song like it meant to be
Cause I feel, and I feel
Like I fell deep inside
And I just don’t care anymore
What goes surround me
Just want to forget it for a moment
And I cried out …
Cause I’m restless
I’m humble; I’m down on my knees
Cause I’m haunting for
Everything that I can’t be
And I still believe …
You know, its time to
Hold on to everything you believe
And I said…
Its time to hold on to
Everything you believe
Everything you believe ..
2006-10-04 15:50:38 · 10 answers · asked by asossin3 1 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
You sound more like Searching than Haunting (not being critical AT ALL) you truly are very gifted and this is really good.
I think you articulate how a lot of us feel at times, especially now with all the hatred and what seems to be hopelessness is before us at every turn. Rest assured this it has been since the beginning of time, yes, horrible horrible stuff right now, but KNOW IT WILL TURN AROUND and start getting better.
Keep expressing and letting it flow like you do, it is apparent this is from the depths of your soul and unchecked thoughts; that takes courage and when you come from that point, it is also flawless because it reflects you.
2006-10-04 15:57:15 · answer #1 · answered by OPTIMIST 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
9/10
2006-10-04 23:01:36 · answer #2 · answered by uhohspaghettiohohs 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it. What kind of music would go with it? Classic rock? Pop?
2006-10-04 22:53:47 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
would need to hear some music. but sounds like a good poem just reading it..
2006-10-04 22:52:15 · answer #4 · answered by mernieinc 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
thats frieken good do u want to be a poet cuz ur really good at poetry
2006-10-04 22:52:49 · answer #5 · answered by megan h 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
too depressing whatever happened to happy songs these days
2006-10-04 22:52:10 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
pretty good
a-
8/10
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how can i put it anyother way
2006-10-04 22:52:35 · answer #7 · answered by R ♥ I ♥ P ♥ Casey Calvert 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Haunting and true for anyone who has survived the teenage years.... you brought me back... thanks! (I think!)
2006-10-04 22:53:25 · answer #8 · answered by deangelis88 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
its good... alittle freaky
2006-10-04 22:57:00 · answer #9 · answered by laylay 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I don't even know wtf is that about
2006-10-04 22:52:19 · answer #10 · answered by ED Cena 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋