im still working on it..but this is what i got so far:
No matter where i go ther's always ho's
pointed at my b*lls, yelled look at those
You know how the rest of this song goes
Girl bend down low, touch your toes
When we party we go crazy baby
crazier than slim shady
Hey Ho lets go!...put a doggie leash on the b*tches neck
if i tug too hard, im afraid it might break
SNAP! whoops! my bad
no need to feel sad
this b*tch no f*cking family had
and everybody likes me, they wont sue
but if u f*ck with me ill kill you too
2006-10-04 12:37:15 · 6 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
What about this one...this is another one of my projects:
Stop the whinining and pissin
get straight to the dissin
pay attention and listen
ur moms about to go missin
form ur funeral ur family ill be dismissin
2006-10-04 12:45:53 · update #1
You picked the wrong guy to call snitch
Who the f*ck u think ur talking to, b*tch
i'll kidnap u and dump u in a ditch
da only way to get out is if ur a f*cking witch
Imma let u there to rot
on the motherf*cking spot
while i got smoke some pot
get my eyes blood shot
ur fat mom tried to get me, stupid SOB
Dont she kno she's wider than a SUV
2006-10-04 12:50:52 · update #2
what about this one:
everytime i look at the page
im suddenly full of rage
im like an animal trapped in a cage
but before i hit the stage
i take my pen and my pad
start rhyming while going loco mad
ill probably be the first white guy to make it to g unit
if not ill be like , f*ck it then screw it
cuz i hear so much stalking
and i think i hear some talking
but ill just keep on walking
cuz i cant shine without my glow
and i cant rap without my flow
every1 kno me, im ktts
i drive a 07 CTS
chrome 24s and lamborghini scissor doors
2006-10-04 13:01:41 · update #3
to Texa$ 2-1-0:
All u do is write little sh*t
Lets see u write as much as i did
Cuz if i c u on da street, u better run
cuz ill take out my 9 and end ur fun
Once ur down I'll holla
grad u by the collar
beat yo face til it turn purple color
the only this thats gonna get polished is ur coffin
And dat green stuff ill be puffin
U looking up from hell sayin sh*t i want some of that!
Ur life may be a comic, but mine's not
im new but i keep the sh*t hot
Never turn around
cuz i got ppl who'll put u 6 feet under the ground
2006-10-04 13:09:54 · update #4
I need more opinions!!!
2006-10-04 13:42:08 · update #5
your **** is weak go to sleep
take my advice,ill slice n dice u into mice
send you to christ into the afterlife
ill mark your fate send you to satans fiery lake
and then ill lock the gate
forget the question and topic
"POW"! i c more "WACK" than them batman comics
this kid couldnt "spit" nasty **** if he had to vomit
your style is too flawed,give it up ya lost
u wouldnt shine if you was brushed n flossed
2006-10-04 12:57:01 · answer #1 · answered by XZELSOR 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
If you're breaking out it's not smart to refer to other artists (slim shady), or to use their lyrics (hey ho let's go by the ramones) but to create your own sound. It sounds pretty good, but I think a respected rapper won't demean women in such a way, because IT HAS BEEN WAY OUTDONE, and it's B O R I N G. I think that if you change a few lyrics here and there, you'll have a winner.
2006-10-04 19:50:54 · answer #2 · answered by Alexandra H 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
yeah, u ansered my question wit this......but damn boi its so good, hit me up sometime on aim or yahoo messenger...my aim is PshhhItsGoinDown and my yahoo messenger is sugarbayb846
2006-10-04 19:44:47 · answer #3 · answered by sugarbayb846 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Dont quit your day job!!
2006-10-04 19:52:46 · answer #4 · answered by Jus call me "BUBS" 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
you are so the next eminem or jay-z i know it!!!!
2006-10-04 19:44:27 · answer #5 · answered by Jessica K 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
its sounds good so far but idk what kinda beat ur puttin it to so i dont really what it sounds like!! lol
2006-10-04 19:42:14 · answer #6 · answered by Brittany 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋