is this a good horror story???

Question

heres a brief summary: a group of friends Aleshia,Annetta,cluadia go camping.after setting up camp,they look around.Claudia spots an abandoned looking cabin.they go inside to check it out.it seems to be in good shape,just a mess.when they get back to thier camp, everything is ripped so they have no choice but to sleep in the cabin.late at night annetta hears a tapping on the window.She takes a flashlight, and goes outside to see what it is.surrounding her are a pack of wolves and a mysterious figure.she trys to run back inside but the cabin burst into fire.somehow almost like magic,the flames seemed to travel slowly.she runs into the woods to find her car that was parked near the streets.with the wolves chasing her,she ran super fast and jumped in her car.she speed of looking for the road. once on it,anetta saw a figure appear and stare at her.somehow she couldn't look away.she let out a scream for her car had run off the cliff into a quarry. her friends had escaped the fire

and were running to find her. the came to the cliff where she fell over and anettas spirit came and told them everything that happened. it turns out that the gigure that was staring at her hypnotized her and told her that to save her firneds, she had to kill the person who set thier cabin on fire. he said it wasnt him. it turns out that person was at the bottom of the quarry and when the car plunged over the edge, it crashed into him, killing him,.

Answer 1

yeah its a really good start

Answer 2

First part is good cuz it has the "it can happen to you" kind of feel, but the last part is hard to believe.

Answer 3

Awesome,except you need to change the names to Nikki, Kaylee, and Towlie.

Answer 4

Why would I want to read a horror story?

Answer 5

THE STORY IS GOOD, NOW I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENED AFTER THAT!

Answer 6

Not bad.

Answer 7

YEAH NOT BAD AT ALL