revised poem which is better?

Question

Why did you come back & haunt me?

I've missed you with all my heart

You left after I gave you my soul.

we're growing further apart

You've changed so much since last time

Is this feeling I feel still love?

Now you're putting thoughts in my mind

You're saying im going crazy

Well I probly am

I want to tell you what i feel like i use to

but somethings holding me back
Now I don't know what to do

go on you say"interested" but i know you really dont care

Youve changed so much since last

i dont even know who you r

well i guess ill just have to keep missing 'cause youre never coming back or my old one

look on my recently added 4 old 1

Answer 1

He's gone, never to come back.
Why the memories? They just make you sad.
Free yourself from the mental slavery
Set yourself free.
There's a beautiful world out there
And many others who'll care.
Open your heart, let others in.
This is the best, I think.
;-)

Answer 2

its good your spelling could use some and maybe take out some words and change them w/ more descriptive language other than that its really good