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"Huge tremors in Washington are markedly felt,
As Woodward reveals more than one Mark Felt,
All is shaping up to be the second Watergate,
Looks like the downfall of Bush will be Iraqate.

Tell your children never to be politicians,
Far better to let them be morticians,
Politicians are lying scumbags,
Believe them and your kids come home in duffel bags.

These politicians love to start their battles,
The world suffers when the dust settles,
Hell, you think they give a piss,
For anything like world peace."

2006-10-03 20:34:27 · 7 answers · asked by TheErrandBoy 2 in News & Events Current Events

7 answers

Straight 10. Its a great socio-psycho commentary on todays politics with great meter, wit, and rhyme. Excellent!

2006-10-03 20:36:41 · answer #1 · answered by joshooog 2 · 0 1

10

2006-10-04 03:37:05 · answer #2 · answered by MizzGibson 2 · 0 2

There is a lot of anger here! Three out of every four lines are OK but now and then you take a dive.
Why does it have to be a poem anyway?

2006-10-04 03:37:40 · answer #3 · answered by Bart S 7 · 0 1

4/10 for subject matter

3/10 for iambic pentameter

4/10 for expression and clarity

1/10 for impact

2006-10-04 03:36:45 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0 1

I will give it 9 I like how it rhymes at the end of each sentence but I don't like the poem too much. :)

2006-10-04 03:50:38 · answer #5 · answered by blahh >.> 2 · 0 2

Two nuts up!

2006-10-04 03:36:18 · answer #6 · answered by supersquirrel987 1 · 1 1

i'll give it a 6...

2006-10-04 03:44:08 · answer #7 · answered by kuih_doryaki_sedap 2 · 1 1

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