Hey
i need to coonect these two sentences:
The month that would bring so much happiness
I was going to see my family that I havent seen for over 2 years.
Thanks!!!
2006-10-03 15:21:31 · 11 answers · asked by BrbE 3 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
It was the month that would bring so much happiness;
I was going to see my family that I hadn't seen for over two years.
OR
In the month that would bring so much happiness,
I was going to see my family that I hadn't seen for over two years.
By the way, the first sentence is perfectly all right, but it's flat. It simply states a pleasant fact.
But the second is an intriguing sentence; it leaves some questions unanswered, and it leaves the reader wanting more. It has an element of doubt, and maybe even danger. You'd hook me with that one!
2006-10-03 15:25:08 · answer #1 · answered by Michigan 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I was going to see my family that I havent seen for over 2 years FOR a month that would bring so much happiness
2006-10-03 15:25:23 · answer #2 · answered by chica loco 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The month that would bring so much happiness; I was going to see my family that I havent seen for over 2 years, i belive
2006-10-03 15:24:55 · answer #3 · answered by Chikin 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋
The month that would bring so much happiness- I was going to see my family that I haven't seen for over two years.
Or: June (whatever month it is) was the month that would bring so much happiness; I was going to see my family that I have not seen for over two years. (Maybe it should be had not instead of have not) semi-colon to connect related sentences
I think in formal writing you don't use contractions and you write out numbers under 100.
2006-10-03 15:29:13 · answer #4 · answered by cashmaker81 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
a comma
The month that would bring so much happiness, I was going to see my family that I haven't seen for over two years.
2006-10-03 15:30:30 · answer #5 · answered by embarking_souls 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋
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2016-11-26 01:37:03 · answer #6 · answered by ? 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The month that I get to see my family again after 2 years would be a joyful one.
2006-10-03 15:23:41 · answer #7 · answered by Mila 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
you cant use semicolons unless you have an independent clause (like, a complete thought) on both sides. Colons, you must have a complete thought, then the colon, then a list.
i would stick with the commas until you get really familiar with the semicolons and colons. they are a bit tricky.
2006-10-03 15:25:47 · answer #8 · answered by twim 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
just a comma ,
: is for starting a list
; is for in relation to, but not entirely
2006-10-03 15:30:45 · answer #9 · answered by creach28 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
you need to use the comma
2006-10-03 15:26:16 · answer #10 · answered by ghostly 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋