2006-10-03 10:37:25 · 11 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
Yeah! I keep forgeting to engage brain before putting mouth in gear!
2006-10-03 10:39:03 · answer #1 · answered by Basketcase 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
you do no longer probable elect to comprise the 'Raven Maddison' bit in it, except it is substantial later on interior the plot. additionally, that is no longer necassary to state the place her brother and his buddy have been: in basic terms saying that they had long gone to a various room could be sufficient. attempt to introduce new characters gradually. that is form of a lot introducing Jade, Raven Maddison, Eric, Jack and Jared all in some sentences. If she had a weigh down on him, he does no longer be 'some boy'. Describe him somewhat greater, describe her thoughts in the direction of him. What does she like approximately him? What does he try this actually catches her interest? and how could she be having a pipe dream into area on an analogous time as interpreting the e book approximately Raven Maddison? lower back, in basic terms saying her mothers and dads weren't in could be sufficient. you have a large form of unneeded, extra information. it may be 'relax' no longer 'shill'. 'Jade became into honestly horrified!' does not sound so precise with the exclamation marks. Describe worry and horror descending on her coronary heart; use similies and figureative speech. And end it with an entire provide up, it's going to provide it greater feeling. Having an exclamation mark makes it look somewhat...jokey. finished stops, a quantity long and short sentences and solid words could be useful in making contributions to the ambience.
2016-12-26 08:34:22 · answer #2 · answered by ? 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Generally my mouth doesn't write checks.
2006-10-03 11:50:48 · answer #3 · answered by Bighippo67 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I'm more of a Cash and Carry guy
2006-10-03 10:39:47 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
i don't know... my butt is pretty well covered. do you want to make a withdrawal?
2006-10-03 10:39:14 · answer #5 · answered by biffer84 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
ALL THE TIME!
2006-10-03 10:38:50 · answer #6 · answered by wonderwmn31 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Every now and then
2006-10-03 10:40:16 · answer #7 · answered by nursejess8 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
LOOK AT MY PIC DUDE... does it look like I have a problem?
2006-10-03 10:45:38 · answer #8 · answered by ? 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
never.
im unstoppable
2006-10-03 11:09:06 · answer #9 · answered by Jenster*is*flipping*you*off 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Not so far.
2006-10-03 10:46:18 · answer #10 · answered by LORD Z 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋