HOW DO YOU LIKE THIS POEM?? MY FRIEND WROTE IT.
Why did you come back & haunt me?
I've missed you with all my heart
You left after I gave you my soul.
You've changed so much since last time
Is this feeling I feel still love?
Now you're putting thoughts in my head
You're saying im going crazy
Well I probly am
I want to tell you what i feel like i use to
but somethings holding me back
go on you say"interested" but i know you really dont care
Youve changed so much since last
i dont even know who you r
well i guess ill just have to keep missing 'cause youre never coming back
2006-10-03 10:11:35 · 6 answers · asked by lol 2 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
I wanted to come back to haunt you
after I dissed you with all my heart
I left in fear of your accepting soul.
I feign change to attract you again
To gain access to you love
Twisting the truth excites me
to manipulate you and make you doubt.
Is it working
I can tell you want to tell me something
but something is holding you back
I'll have to remain interested until you give me another clue
and keep pretending I've changed
You really don't know me
but you will and then I’ll really break your heart.
2006-10-03 11:16:19 · answer #1 · answered by Ralph 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
its is a great poem,
its just a bit more lyrical than poetic if u get me? :)
like the 2nd line the last word is HEART
the 4th line should have somthing to do with wen u PART :)
hope this helps! and good luck to your friend with writing! :)
2006-10-03 17:22:10 · answer #2 · answered by xx i am me xx 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Nice but I like them more when they rhyme.Good luck to your friend!!!!!
2006-10-03 17:42:56 · answer #3 · answered by Ali.D 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
strong emotions
2006-10-05 17:09:23 · answer #4 · answered by Gold Wings 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
very nice
2006-10-03 17:13:46 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
love it
2006-10-03 18:27:01 · answer #6 · answered by SwordDancer 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋