Because
You’ve got me turning the page
I’ve busted out of my cage
I’m singing on stage about you
I’m spending my wage
You cast your spell like a mage
I’m here to say that I love you
Oh, I love you
I tip my glass down goes the beer
Searching for the words to fit here
My knees get weak I lean on the wall
Will I stand or will I fall
I take a shot down goes the gin
And the room starts to spin
But I’m not drunk I’m in love
And I know it because….because….because…because
You’ve got me turning the page
I’ve busted out of my cage
I’m singing on stage about you
I’m spending my wage
You cast your spell like a mage
I’m here to say that I love you
Oh, I love you
You take a puff in it flows
You feel light from your head to your toes
You start to laugh at stupid ****
As you take another hit
You could say that you’re not low
And everything seams real slow
But I’m not high I’m in love
And I know it because….because….because…because
You’ve got me turning the page
I’ve busted out of my cage
I’m singing on stage about you
I’m spending my wage
You cast your spell like a mage
I’m here to say that I love you
Oh, I love you
You look at me I look at you
I hope you know just what to do
Things feel good things feel right
As I look up at the light
Time stands still
Things slow down
All smiles now no frowns
Always look up never look down
We’ll run away from this town
Because…because…because
You’ve got me turning the page
I’ve busted out of my cage
I’m singing on stage about you
I’m spending my wage
You cast your spell like a mage
I’m here to say that I love you
Oh, I love you
2006-10-03 03:34:39 · 13 answers · asked by Zach S 1 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
I'm sure all ages would like this song ! Be carefull posting your lyrics ! Somebody could steal them ! I really hated mentioning that, I don't want to give anybody any ideas , just making sure you watch your back ! Peace
2006-10-03 03:44:23 · answer #1 · answered by Geronimo 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I'm not really going to knock it because I prob could do no better. But, it reminds me of the movie Happy Gilmore when they're in the bar...him and the arrogant golfer Shooter and they're having the ryhming stand off. You just have tooo much rhyming going on in my opinion.
2006-10-03 03:44:56 · answer #2 · answered by ~The Bytch 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Hey i like it,just don't forget that practice makes perfect,the term every song must rhyme don't hold water now, but it did in the 50's and 60's
2006-10-03 03:47:52 · answer #3 · answered by staggerlee1944 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
to be honest i dont really like the chorus, its more like a poem. songs dont have to rhyme it could be a shorter chorus with just a few lines that rhyme, its nice though. you must be loved up.hope it has a good melody
2006-10-03 03:41:51 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
It okay but it seems more like a poem how you are rhyming every other word like couplets, not every song has to rhyme. but i see the point you were getting at in the song.
2006-10-03 03:37:34 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Lyrics are great..but if I dont hear the music of the song,I cant say much about it!
2006-10-03 03:41:17 · answer #6 · answered by firefly 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
maybe u should be more careful about posting the songs u write cuz someone might steal them
2006-10-03 03:48:41 · answer #7 · answered by mikeclassof09 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Not bad. But, what's a mage? I would love to hear to music.
2006-10-03 06:08:49 · answer #8 · answered by kimgirlscout 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
what kind of song is it supposed to be? pretty cool if you can make up your own song, all i can do is look at them and say wow. you have patience. i don't.
2006-10-03 03:38:25 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Read about two thirds of it and stopped to write this.
NOT.
2006-10-03 03:54:48 · answer #10 · answered by xtrapr 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋