As far as fluidity your not bad but you are using your hands to much try to calm them down a little and let them accentuate whatever else you are doing. Your hands and arms are going everywhere and distracting from whatever else you are doing. You need to work on transitions A LOT! There are too many times when the transition does not flow and is too obvious. Wear something that doesn't fall off of you since pulling your pants up does not really look very nice. I didn't like the intro at all. You looked like your twitching and floping around but didn't match the flow of the song at that point. Try something slower there that has a softer flowing feel to it. And at least if your going to show the video on the internet... clean up the part of your room visible in the camera.
2006-10-03 08:45:12
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answered by cassandra581 6
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Brava!
That was really good. You obviously have a passion for dance so I hope you persue it. the only thing is you may want to work on the control of all your movements.
What separates an "ok" dancer (someone who moves with rythm for fun) and a really good dancer is good dancer (especially professional ones) have lithe, strong and flexible movements. You just need to take some lessons to gain control of your movements, then you'll be "off da chain" girl.
2006-10-03 07:46:59
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answered by Jehan J 2
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I think you need to clean your room and loose some weight. In all honesty, it looked a bit funny. Your style of dancing does not project you as a sexy or beautiful woman. try signing up for some dance classes somewhere. Sorry.
2006-10-02 23:10:42
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answered by Jose Esoj 3
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Not bad for club dancing , as a matter of fact , however on a proffessional level you would need more work . I.E. precision of moves, as well as diversity .
2006-10-03 00:06:39
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answered by Ray H 7
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You are talented but you need more range of motion and precision. Take dance classes.
2006-10-03 05:51:07
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answered by Snowflake 7
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Not bad........not bad at all.........but u didnt say if u wanted to dance alone or with a partner........if single then u are pretty good.......if with a partner then dont dance like this with him.......he will faint or u will kick him...............no offence...........just joking.......u are a pretty good dancer but i thing u can improve a lot.............
2006-10-02 23:10:40
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answered by lyonelboy 2
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I dig it but you may need a tighter belt
2006-10-02 23:10:06
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answered by Victor 4
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Some good moves.
Now get your room cleaned up:>)
2006-10-02 23:08:31
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answered by Bladerunner (Dave) 5
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