grade this , i have fun wrote it before when to bed , this one goes out to my buddy old friend it called a song for you
Song For You
``It’s alright``
It’s okay
I’m gonna be alright
Broken heart, can be healed
Broken dream, can come true
Yeah… whoo
Hey, your not here around me
I know world doesn’t goes around me
Worries and my pain
Don’t make a big deal out of it
Just as long
You don’t give up
No, I won’t give up on you
Like a song on my head
I’m turning around
Like a beat of my own heart
For my sin, I’m humble
For I pray, I drop and kneel
`` `` ``
Haven’t seen a blue skies
Haven’t hear a sharp sound of music
I’m logging since so long
Now it’s all coming back to me
Don’t take it too hard
We fall, and get back again
And when times passing by
The news will seem like yesterday
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2006-10-02 14:34:55 · 11 answers · asked by asossin3 1 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
I like it. Sounds like a friend needed some positive words.
2006-10-02 14:37:48 · answer #1 · answered by helpmehanginthere 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i did no longer extremely like all of them. If I had to %. i might say seventh simply by fact I had my 2 favourite instructors in that grade, yet on the turn area I additionally had the single that ruined my life!
2016-12-12 19:25:34 · answer #2 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Good, if it's a song, it could use a little more length, but I also have no feel for the base and rythem
2006-10-02 14:36:36 · answer #3 · answered by Bob 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Full of cliches
How long have you been logging?
I hear logging is hard work ...with all the trees and stuff..ya know
2006-10-02 15:23:16 · answer #4 · answered by CYNICAL 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think you were either high when you wrote it or you need spell check. I think you have a good start though.
2006-10-02 14:40:32 · answer #5 · answered by raina g 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
is it not supposed to rhyme
i like my songs better
jus email me and i will send it 2 you
go 2 my Q&A and email me
B+
2006-10-02 14:39:01 · answer #6 · answered by jawaii5 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
c+
2006-10-02 14:36:12 · answer #7 · answered by ohdarliingletgo 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i thinks its ok
2006-10-02 14:38:37 · answer #8 · answered by redneckhickgal 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
B
2006-10-02 14:37:50 · answer #9 · answered by missmurder97 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
that is pretty good...
B+++
2006-10-02 14:43:11 · answer #10 · answered by polarbaby 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋