Sweet Dreams
I want this girl can’t you see
How much she means to me
And I can’t get her hard as I try
But my feelings for her will never die
I just wish I could get the chance
To take her to one last dance
So I’ll pray now to the man up above
To spend one night with the girl I love
(Chorus)
Many chances I have had
None end good all end bad
But if I could get that one night
I would make everything right
I’d give the world to this girl
Diamonds, clothes, jewelry, and pearls
Do anything to see her smile
To have a chance
I must be in denial
Somehow I passed the test
Asked her out and she said yes
Perfect is how it has to be
If not then she’ll forget about me
Eight p.m. rolls around
I pick her up for a night on the town
Walk up and knock on the door
It opens up and the crowd starts to roar
She’s so beautiful it’s almost painful
Cause I’m in love with an angle
She’s perfect: smart, funny, and kind
I could stare at her till the end of time
(Chorus 2x)
Now it’s time to take her home
Ignore the calls that I get on my phone
Spend as much time with her as I can
Because a chance like this will never happen again
She says what a good time she had
I reply it wasn’t half bad
And in for the kiss I lean
That’s when I wake…
Up from my dream
2006-10-02 13:53:42 · 12 answers · asked by Zach S 1 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
Wow, that a really good song. I always like it when the guy does actually get the girl he only wishes he could get. This song had that, but then it seemed like those always a happy ending songs, and a lot of times the world just isn't like that. Then you add that twist, and upon your waking up you bring the song back to 'reality', where sometimes don't get that one.
I think that good songs are created by multiple elements. Words to a good song tell the story. Sometimes it's not always as straight across the board, you get lines that don't always make sense except when added together as a whole, but then there are ones that are to the point. (both types have their pros/cons)
When you feel a wide array of emotion during a song, the higher I rate it. Your song took us through everything that's so great and so bad about being in love, longing, excitement anxiety, nervousness, wow, aching happiness, regret at dates end, confidence, kissable, then reality.
This song says a lot, I bet you had someone that inspired this song. You knew all the feelings to express, so if you didn't then I don't know how you could have nailed it.
What sound were you thinking for this song? (this is one of those songs that at least 10 different styles would sound great, but I would go with a rock sound. I am sure anything you'd like would sound the best though. Is this amongst your first songs? If so (and even if its #482) I think that you a good song writer. It is a hard field to get into, (cuz you gotta get heard, signed (for writing or if you were going to be in the 'band' too), get popular and then to be popular for another song, until you have 2-3-4 songs, then you can be known well and not a one hitter. If it something you want to do, then I hope I get to hear a song of yours someday, how it sounds in your head not mine.
2006-10-02 14:50:21 · answer #1 · answered by girlnoladrea 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I wrecken that's alright but, i Don't know the tune to it so it kinda makes it a bit hard without the tune!! But that's a goood song but make it with a tune and it'll be better. Oh and make sure u have a good voice for that song!!!!!!! Good Luck with the singing career!
2006-10-02 14:00:45 · answer #2 · answered by KrystalKlear 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
OMG that is a such sweet song
I LOVE IT
i think that u should chnge this part "I’d give the world to this girl"
to like "i'd give the world to her"
well i dont kow it depends on the music
but i really like it
2006-10-02 14:03:29 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
You wrote that? Wow, thats great!! I loved it!! I mean the end...oh wow awesome!! It was kinda cheesey like in the beginning and stuff but then you ended it well! Good job. keep writing!
2006-10-02 14:02:16 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Awsome, I think it could make top 10 depending on the tune
2006-10-02 14:02:47 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I wish I knew who you are so I can say I gave you an opinion about this song when it hits it big. Your going places. Thats talent!!!!!
2006-10-02 14:03:28 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very nice!
Sound like it is truly from the heart. I just hope she is understanding enough to enjoy it.
2006-10-02 14:06:30 · answer #7 · answered by jjretnavy 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
pretty good. check us out on the internet and send me the file at www.myspace.com/djbizzyben and I will try and publish you! that could go big. reply
2006-10-02 13:59:26 · answer #8 · answered by TruSouljaz 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it's a very sweet song! i love it! it makes me want to be the girl in the song! (lol)
the only problem i have with it is that you misspelled "angel"
~*amber*~
2006-10-02 13:59:00 · answer #9 · answered by A Light to Burn All the Empires♥ 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
dude it pretty good u need to keep writning songs
2006-10-02 14:07:30 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋