This verse is rap/hardcore. The beat is dark, hardcore, and angry, as is my voice. The song is rap/rock.
Black scars torn apart/ an unfinished story done before the start/ rappin for no profit it's inside my heart/ keeping others desperate some starving art/ a starving artist a business twisted/ an ended gift with a pistol whipped and/ brought out the glock shot out the dark/ rhymin for the block and keepin strong my lock/ the key is gone but the feelings there/ I'll never fall for a hoe again I swear/ a gifted kid from the beginning an ending twisted together binding/ trying to stop all this lying/ hating and decieving soon grieving at funerals then leaving/ reciepts torn up arms left cut/ bleeding and scarred up from the outside in/ as I begin to torment my sins/ up and about commiting more than them/ a simple lie etched deeper than skin/ like beauty cause a girl has to have a personality/ as well as the looks call me shallow okay/ but I won't go for hoes no more so stay away/ I'll remember this day/ from now on through ages/ through learned lessons, death, and fake acts staged/ brought up in a place/ where anger remains/ the same after days even though the words seem left astray/ standing in a way some can say only belongs to Satan/ so forgive my sins Lord and keep me from my grave/ send me up to Heaven's gates/ leave me laughing and great/ happy and pleasent as can be/ these are words felt at fifteen/ scenes of torrential bad thoughts fall/ leak from the brain and reveal all/ as I format a plan/ to be far from what I ran from/ as I go back take two looks then kick sumthin up/ and fix this problem kill all this drama/ keep my thoughts at sorry and never far from stardom//
2006-10-02 12:30:02 · 6 answers · asked by Harhar2930902 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
Okay guys yes this is just a verse I do rap and it goes by in about a minute a 1:15 or so. It features a few other artist who sing to lengthen the song.
2006-10-02 12:35:37 · update #1
Wow!!!I really like it. If you are a talented rapper, then maybe you could get a record deal.
2006-10-02 12:34:23 · answer #1 · answered by osembob 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
in the e book of Psalms, the word statutes means word, certainty, and the ensures made. King Saul replaced into no longer doing or appearing as he could have and God knew this and had him replaced by using David, a guy that knew God nicely and believed with faith in all of his can provide. David additionally comes from the religious descendants of Abraham who replaced into promised the dominion of Heaven and he observed God's instructions. Your question approximately most of the previous testomony does nonetheless carry authentic to three degree yet a number of those rules have been to manage the international because it existed in a various time. we at the instant are considered to stay in the recent testomony. confident, take meaning from the previous and comprehend that the ten Commandments have been meant for us too yet additionally comprehend that our international now exist in the recent testomony and that's the place you flow to discover the training of as we communicate's international that do comprise most of the previous. continuously does recommend continuously or eternity. It does not give up while Christ returns and is going previous any time we are in a position to ever think of. The continuously area you basically could have self assurance in in case you suspect in God. you're able to have faith in the Bible because of the fact the authentic word of God from start to end no rely if it applies to you in my opinion or no longer. I do have faith we study training from the previous testomony and that's written so as that they do no longer seem to be repeated and given to us as our hazard to check from it.
2016-10-18 09:22:35 · answer #2 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I see no light from within your dark space, why do you keep such darkness to surround you ,and yet you ask for stardom. this delusion in your air, and in the space you care not. to take others.where you are,for their sake, keep them out as you have surely locked the door.
2006-10-02 12:45:26 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
wow i think it is great no really i would neva be able 2 think of something like that . way 2 go
2006-10-02 12:32:04 · answer #4 · answered by sandersstefani 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's very good........are you sure that is just a verse...I think it could be a whole song......well maybe I don't know
2006-10-02 12:33:40 · answer #5 · answered by Emily M 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
wow ur good!
2006-10-02 12:38:12 · answer #6 · answered by Girl 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋