What do you think of this ?

Question

give it a rating , always looking for advice .


BEACH

As you walk along the sand,
You feel warmth against your skin.
The waves washing seashells on the shore.
As your walk along the sand,
You see children making sandcastles as parent sun bath watching their kids.
As you walk along the sand,
Seaguls flying on high waiting for a scrap of food left behind.
As you walk along the sand,
You'll never forget sight or feeling at the beach.


G After reading a horror you get goosebumps
H a house with haunting
O Always a outcast
S is for stories paranormal untold
T is for time of which took place

H is for horror that is seen
A is for Altitude of location
U is for unusal that occurs daily
N is for nerves that are shot
T is for team that search for clues

Answer 1

very good...I'll give you a "A"

Answer 2

It's very good. I give it a nine.