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One With Winter
Drifting through the cold nights
The clouds close and the air freezes
Eyes bleed from these razor sharp winds
Struggle through the tundra depths
Time disappears, and I collapse betrayed
The eyes of my grey soul finally close
Darkness spirals and deepens
As my bitter old heart gives out
In the glaring glow of fog
I search the eternal woods
I drift in endlessness hopelessly
There is no escape to be found
In this dark entrapment called life
A lifeless figure falls
Embraced by the shadows of the woods
Sealed amongest the dead trees
Silent blood darkens the Earth
The souls of loners are the first to die
In the glaring glow of fog
I search the eternal woods
I drift in endlessness hopelessly
There is no escape to be found
In this dark entrapment called life
Lands of screaming silence
Mazes of lost innocence
A soul encrypted to ice forever
That shall screech in infamy
2006-10-01 19:56:13 · 2 answers · asked by darkwinterdweller 1 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
Fantastic!
I can envision every word, every image. You've got some talent there mate!
If I heard these lyrics attached to some haunting/cold tune, it would be one to buy!
2006-10-01 20:05:59 · answer #1 · answered by genghis41f 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i like it . it has a viking / black metal feel to it. i have been doing death metal for about 17 years. keep at it.
2006-10-02 22:25:54 · answer #2 · answered by knowssignlanguage 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋