Well here it is
How the Beaver became a symbol of Canada
It all started when Miss.Hamton (wife of Mrs. John A. MacDonald) was picking her carrots from her garden, Then she saw a little rabbit come to the carrots. Oh no! She Thought. “Go away! Skat! Leave now!” she yelled. Then she suddenly saw some more rabbit’s…and more, until 1000 rabbit’s came. “NOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!” She yelled, and ran into her house.
Right away she quickly phoned the “Super Beavers” and called them to come right away. When the beavers got there, one suddenly came out of the truck. “Are you the only beaver?” Miss. Hamton asked. “YEPeroonie” the beaver said. “You only?!?!” Miss. H. asked. “Yes, the only beaver. My name is Beaver. And Oh yes, what’s the problem?”
A few minutes later, Beaver got to work on Miss. Hamtons problem. “Oh, yes, I know what to do, I will make a machine that will scare the rabbits away!” Beaver said. So he went into his truck to grab some parts, and then started to build. A few minutes later he finished his wooden invention. It looked big, it had a whole bunch of metal in it too, and with a seat to sit in well controlling it. So Beaver brought it outside to test it. “Here I go” he said to Miss Hamton. He tested it and and and!!!……. It didn’t work! It didn’t even budge! “Noooooooo!!” Beaver yelled.
An hour late, Beaver decided to fix it. So, he got to work again. He added new parts and even asked for parts that Miss. Hamton kept in her garage. A few minutes later, Beaver took the machine outside. He brung it over to the garden where the carrots were planted. Beaver sat in the machine, then turned it on, and and and… It makes a loud noise that was very painful to there ears, even the hole town could hear it! People where yelling things like “ Turn down the volume on the Television! Will ya?!! Aaaaahhh!!!! Miss. Hamton and Beaver yelled. The rabbits started to run away as fast as they could. “Yes!! You did it!!” Miss Hamton yelled to beaver. “WAHOO!!!” Beaver yelled.
After Beaver put everything away, Miss. Hamton came up to Beaver for his reward. “Thank you so very much Beaver! Your reward is that I am going to make you a symbol of Canada! I just have to call John.” She told him. So she called him, and Beaver left with happiness.
That is how the Beaver became a symbol of Canada.
2006-10-01 16:08:59 · 9 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
Oh ya, it's supposed to be a fiction book!
2006-10-01 16:14:31 · update #1
Check your punctuation and a few other things first.
The plural of rabbit is rabbits, not rabbit's.
There is no need for a period after Miss..
Do a little more proofreading. You will find other places to correct or improve.
Overall, not bad!
2006-10-01 16:16:10 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋
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2016-08-29 09:25:46 · answer #2 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
eh? Why not, it has everything! It has bunnies, it has carrots, it has noisy busy beaver. It even has old drunken John A. getting a call. darn good thing he was within earshot. But no Courier de Bois. No Northwest Company. No Company of Adventurers Trading into Hudson's Bay. no Beaver hats. No Mohawks, no Iroquois or Algonquins. No war between the French and English.
It just could be so much more. but it is cute and has nothing offencive in it, little kids would enjoy it.
2006-10-01 16:31:59 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
You might want to get the information from a Canadian, so the book can be about the Canadian beaver "according to Canada" not the US.
2006-10-01 16:11:28 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sorry but the story is extremely misleading. Children's books are generally used to teach children a lesson, moral, or fact. To teach them a fake fact is useless, so unfortunately there is no market for your story.
2006-10-01 16:23:25 · answer #5 · answered by merfie 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Personally, I don't think that this is a good book to publish. if it was the true story, that would be a good book, but lying to kids is a bad idea.
2006-10-01 16:12:37 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
What a load of crap! Everybody knows the real reason and every other country is jealous they didn't think of it first!
2006-10-01 16:12:20 · answer #7 · answered by something'srotten 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Honestly??? I think it might mislead kids into thinking that is the real reason...
2006-10-01 16:12:10 · answer #8 · answered by HONORARIUS 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
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2006-10-01 16:10:06 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋