This is a test to see how romanticly you can express yourself in poetry...please continue this for me...show me what you got....
"I lost all consiousness of the world, because i knew my heart was won.......continue
2006-10-01 05:09:39 · 11 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
I lost all consciousness of the world,
because my heart was won-
So never again would I look upon
this world as mine for fun.
The love that he did give to me
has caused me to arise
And see the nobler things of life
as tho' through this ones' eyes.
This is my gift to you.
2006-10-01 05:47:09 · answer #1 · answered by Zeera 7 · 2⤊ 1⤋
I lost all consiousness of the world,
because I knew my heart was won.
I prayed,
"Dear Lord I plead, don't
leave this love undone."
I Have so many things I want to say,
and much more left to do.
I never thought I could feel this way,
I'm so In Love with You.
hope this helps!!
2006-10-02 00:35:28 · answer #2 · answered by don_steele54 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Are you trying to get other people to write a note to your lover for you? How about a poem for school?
I lost all consiousness of the world, because i knew my heart was won.......and then you broke it.
2006-10-01 12:13:04 · answer #3 · answered by Lolabel 2 · 1⤊ 1⤋
I lost all consiousness of the world, because i knew my heart was won.... Then I woke up and realized picking up women after 5 hours of drinking never bears good results.
2006-10-01 12:22:23 · answer #4 · answered by echiasso 3 · 2⤊ 2⤋
I lost all consciousness of the world, because i knew my heart was won....it skipped a beat and my joyous feelings washed over me.
2006-10-03 00:14:59 · answer #5 · answered by makes me wonder 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The morning dew sparkles majesticly while a teardrop of melancholy joy flows slowly and softly onto the clover.
2006-10-01 12:24:02 · answer #6 · answered by kurticus1024 7 · 2⤊ 1⤋
No more than I could turn back the tides or stop the sun from setting, would I be able to deny this emotion.
2006-10-01 12:15:42 · answer #7 · answered by ©2009 7 · 2⤊ 1⤋
I lost all consciousness of the world, and knew my heart was won,
But I was in America, and you'd shot me with your gun!
2006-10-01 12:21:21 · answer #8 · answered by avian 5 · 2⤊ 2⤋
I got a dude to do my homework for me, I got to have all the fun.
Hmm. does't quite work, now you show us and your teacher what you got.
2006-10-01 12:21:16 · answer #9 · answered by girlnoladrea 3 · 1⤊ 1⤋
then your father walked in and told me to get off his daughter-and now i'm on the run.
2006-10-01 18:21:41 · answer #10 · answered by NONAME 3 · 1⤊ 1⤋