Truly Listening
Are you truly listening?
Do you even care?
Do you listen to the sound of my voice,
Or do you just hear me without truly listening?
Does it matter to you?
Do you realize the pain you put me though?
Are you listening?
Please listen to me!!
2006-10-01 04:04:35 · 13 answers · asked by majorette13 2 in Family & Relationships ➔ Friends
This is to everyone who feels like they dont matter. Who needs someone to listen to them!
2006-10-01 04:17:22 · update #1
I believe when you wrote this poem the lord put me in your mind because that poem is me & what i am going through in my so called relationship
2006-10-01 04:06:30 · answer #1 · answered by hemingwayhome 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋
This one makes me sad.. It reminds me of a girl who went through the exact same thing. Overall, I like it a lot, because I can relate to it with past relationships, and because it flows really well, and has some deep meaning. Nice work.
2006-10-01 04:41:25 · answer #2 · answered by Zack D 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Poems are supposed to rhyme...prose is supposed to a least have some internal rythym to it. Yours has neither besides being vapid and self absorbed - how old are you 13? Keep trying
2006-10-01 04:54:44 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
How can I listen to u when u don't even say anything to me except so many question.
2006-10-01 04:07:53 · answer #4 · answered by Fahim . 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its not bad, i kind of like it, it gets the point across, and has a truly deep meaning that a lot of people feel.
2006-10-01 04:07:47 · answer #5 · answered by Bert 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Well, I think it is a little abstract. For my taste. I'm sure it has more meaning to you.
2006-10-01 04:15:51 · answer #6 · answered by JaneDivided 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
yeah i like it kind of the same here
2006-10-01 04:21:12 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Its okay............I like it or the idea of the poem
2006-10-01 05:17:23 · answer #8 · answered by diran o 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i love it,cuz dats how i feel everyday.
2006-10-01 04:27:11 · answer #9 · answered by a_raveneau 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it is ok hun , nothing that will make ya rich.
2006-10-01 04:07:56 · answer #10 · answered by ~just_jd~ 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋