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Tiltle: Off The Pitch
genre: Crime, gangster, violence, drama, romance
main characters:
Fillipo-football player-26 years of age
Girgio-godfather-mafia boss-56 years of age
Doni-referre-35 years of age
Fabio-mafia member-28 years of age
Raul-mafia member/ physical trainer-64 years of age
Laura-collrge professor-27 years of age
Ricardo-football player-25 years of age
Tino-mafia member-45 years of age
Gabi-23-student
the story is about match fixing in the country of Brasil where
a mafia family tend to do business.
when 2 players get involved in it. it soon becomes the beginning of a road of blood shed. Ahed of the road the 2 players amy find love, happiness and heartbrakes.

2006-09-30 20:39:46 · 9 answers · asked by garnes d 2 in Arts & Humanities Books & Authors

9 answers

You did not give the story - just the background.
It depends how you narrate it and build up the characters and the Plot.
For the theme - it is a matter of personal taste. I like mafia stories because they are real life stories. I can give 8

EnJoy

2006-09-30 20:52:48 · answer #1 · answered by vinod s 4 · 0 0

4

2006-09-30 20:42:15 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

10

2006-09-30 20:50:00 · answer #3 · answered by jon 4 · 0 0

A- 11. I definitely loathe dream openers. B- 5. it is already cliche, amd they're boring so I extra factors :3 C- 4. it quite is extra of an adolescent reasonable fiction component. And maximum of human beings use desires on the instant it style of feels to have slipped out of the norm. E- 2. Eccentric, yet cool, and uncommon. F- 0- I easily have in no way heard of this earlier. it is imaginitive and imaginitive :) G- 5- it is style of cliche, yet i like it. H- 7. yet nonetheless relaxing to ensure. I- 6. lower back, extra of an adolescent component. yet nonetheless cliche. J- 10. actual overused. ORDER F E C G B I H J A

2016-10-18 07:12:29 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

sorry 1

2006-09-30 20:42:13 · answer #5 · answered by learningnewthings 4 · 0 0

Sounds boring and unoriginal.
Maybe you should tell more about this story,
I might be wrong

2006-10-01 00:02:58 · answer #6 · answered by smalvina 3 · 0 0

didnt give enough info to rate sorry

2006-09-30 20:45:22 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

theres not enough info

2006-09-30 22:46:56 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

hmm..i'd say about 4.

2006-09-30 21:08:15 · answer #9 · answered by S 4 · 0 0

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