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Does He Remember?

Does he remember the touch of my skin?
Does he remember the curls in my hair?
Does he remember the sound of my voice?
Does he remember that he cared?

Does he remember what we were?
Does he remember talking about nothing for hours?
Does he remember spending precious time with me?
Does he remember saying "together we'll always be"?

Does he remember the things we did together?
Does he remember the things we said to each other?
Does he remember telling me "I love you"?
Does he remember anything, anything at all?

Does he remember?

2006-09-30 09:24:37 · 8 answers · asked by majorette13 2 in Arts & Humanities Other - Arts & Humanities

This is a peom that I wrote last year after a bad realtionship!!!

2006-09-30 09:30:17 · update #1

This was just a poem about how I felt at that very moment Im over him now!! I just wanted to to see if anyone agreed with my peom!!

2006-09-30 09:34:32 · update #2

8 answers

Verty good. The longing and sadness comes through quite clearly, as does the doubt. Pain is one of the most powerful emotions and peotry is one of the best ways to express it.

2006-09-30 09:38:07 · answer #1 · answered by kveldulfgondlir 5 · 0 0

Does he remembers,
I've always wonder,
Of the times we were together,
The things we did, the words being traded,
In a world of our own.

All of that is now gone.
Only memories exist,
Of which I need to get rid.

Does he remembers?
Why bothers?
It only brings sorrows
Now that he's gone forever.

:-)

2006-09-30 15:36:00 · answer #2 · answered by TK 4 · 0 0

I guess he might not want to remember because a lot of guys can be *** holes! But the girls need to be strong so yeah!

2006-09-30 09:29:46 · answer #3 · answered by Gales Baby Boo 2 · 0 1

And now, we are all broken hearted after reading this tripe. Dear, this is NOT, repeat NOT, the forum for this sniveling garbage. You were dumped, obviously. Get over it. It will happen again and again. Learn to adjust.

2006-09-30 09:30:59 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 1 1

yes he does remember but he doesnt care if he dumped you. honey you gotta get over it...this is gonna happen so many times in your life

2006-09-30 09:32:48 · answer #5 · answered by carcaterra 3 · 0 0

THAT was lovely start writing poetry and forget this LOSER cause most likely males cannot comprehend much of anything let alone remember ...sureilll

2006-09-30 09:30:10 · answer #6 · answered by COOKIE 6 · 0 2

Wow - I just puked in my mouth a little.

2006-09-30 09:26:52 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 2 0

i,m with you!Even if i'm a boy,I had a girlfriend,and......she just forgot me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

2006-09-30 09:38:30 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

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