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Question

Vlado Petric accepted the assignment, which Pine an American investigator from the International War Crimes offered to him. Vlado’s part of the assignment was that he had to help the IWC to capture a criminal, which seemed odd to Vlado and he predicted that there must be more behind the picture. Vlado had to departure to Bosnia because that was where the IWC planned to capture the criminal.
Vlado is the protagonist or dynamic character who is complex, realistic and changes throughout the story. He used to be a detective back in his home country which was one of the reasons he was chosen. He is a person who thinks outside the box, which means that he is very logical and aware of things that around him. To illustrate this, when the job was offered to him he thought about all the pros and cons before making a decision. Vlado is also responsible and organized because before he leaved Berlin he took care of his family.
Since Vlado is responsible and logical thinker, I feel sympathy for him.
I empathize with him because we have so many in common. For example, he wants to get things done before starting something else. I also believe that I empathize with him because the situations which he went through are kind of similar to what I have been through. I think I understand him pretty well because we a kind have similar personality.
Although, we are so alike, there are several interesting questions that I would like to ask him if he were a real character. One of the questions would be: Why did he accept the assignment, even though it seemed odd? Another question which is a little personal would be: Why didn’t he do anything when he found out that his wife had a relationship with another man.
In short, Vlado is the most interesting character who is very different and complex from the other characters in the novel of “The Small Boat of Great Sorrows”.

Answer 1

indednt your paragraphs, and Why didn’t he do anything when he found out that his wife had a relationship with another man. other than that good job!!

Answer 2

Here is the deal.
I read your questions , and I know that you have asked the same question 4 times .
I will take your essay , "fix it " and post it on your 4 questions , and you will pick me on each one .
If yes , let me know .
Pine, an American investigator from the International War Crimes, offers an assignment to Vlado Petric. Vlado’s part of the assignment was to help the IWC to capture a criminal. This seemed odd to Vlado and he predicted that there must be more behind the picture. Vlado had to departure to Bosnia. That was where the IWC planned to capture the criminal.

Vlado is a dynamic character. He is complex, realistic and changes throughout the story. He used to be a detective back in his home country which was one of the reasons he was chosen. He is a person who thinks outside the box. To illustrate this, when the job was offered to him he thought about all the pros and cons before making a decision. Vlado is also responsible and organized because before he left Berlin he used to took care of his family.

Since Vlado is responsible and logical thinker, I feel sympathy for him. I empathize with him because we have so many in common. First, he wants to get things done before starting something else. Another reason why I understand him is because the situations which he went through are similar to what I have been through. I think I relate to him pretty well because we have similar personalities.

Although, we are so alike, there are several interesting questions that I would like to ask him if he were a real character. One of the questions would be: Why did he accept the assignment, even though it seemed odd? Another question which is a little personal would be: Why didn’t he do anything when he found out that his wife had a relationship with another man?

In short, Vlado is the most interesting character in the novel “The Small Boat of Great Sorrows”. He is very special, sophisticated and his character enjoys more richness than the other characters

Answer 3

When you say you emphathize with him, you need something after "many." You have many what in common?
Can you give an example of the similar situations you went through?
The rest seems OK.

Answer 4

which Pine,
Crimes,
to depart
he left Berlin
Valdo is a responsible
so much in common
we have a kind of similar

Answer 5

yes u missing word and the begining should be capital

Answer 6

every thing is correct