"Only a Ghost?"
I want my memories back
I want them calm
I want them happy
I want them clean
Without you in them
When I wish to go
Into my thoughts
You’re there
Waiting for me
Sitting comfortably on a couch
Grinning at me
You’re in my every fantasy
I want you out of my dreamworld
I can make you exist no more
I only have to forget you
You’re only a ghost
But you return to haunt me
You’re with me everywhere
But I don’t want you anymore
I wish you’d understand
Are you my punishment
Are you my guardian
What are you
To follow me
Wherever I go?
Please, haunt me no more!
2006-09-29 22:47:32 · 14 answers · asked by Analyst 7 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
Nice poem, but hurtful to the other person
2006-09-29 22:51:18 · answer #1 · answered by Blair Waldorf 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's nice. Mind if I suggest you something.
Copy this peom and paste it into microsoft word.
Check each & every word, I mean right click on a word and click on synonyms. You might be lucky enough to find more poetic word !! Try it out Ms. Poet !!
2006-09-30 06:26:46 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Your poem is a form of therapy but what works for me are Alcoholic Anonymous meetings. I get to vent but never suffer writer's cramps.
2006-09-30 05:59:12 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
deep, that's deep. i want to make that into a song and sell it if you dont mind. how bout this.
Hello. I've waited here for you. Everlong.
Tonight I throw myself into,
And out of the red, out of her head she sang
Come down and waste away with me.
Down with me,
Slow how,
you wanted it to be,
I'm over my head, out of her head she sang.
Breathe out,
so I can breathe you in,
Hold you in,
and now, I know you've always been.
Out of your head, out of my head I sing.
And I wonder when I sing along with you,
If everything could ever be this real forever.
If anything could ever be this good again,
The only thing I'll ever ask of you.
You gotta promise not to stop when I say when.
2006-09-30 05:56:40 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sounds fine. Good to write out things - can help to get them out of your system.
What you might try is to take your poem and burn it!! This will help you release the ghost.
2006-09-30 05:54:55 · answer #5 · answered by mama T 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think that it is an brilliant poem. It is very easy to understand (unlike a lot of poems that I have read) and it probably means a lot to a lot of people.
2006-09-30 06:02:50 · answer #6 · answered by javaman 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
a 8 out ot 10... quite good. who's the ghost u're talking about?
2006-09-30 06:06:15 · answer #7 · answered by time-OUT 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
An Angel Meant to Be
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When It all comes down to this,
It all makes more sense,
Your soul sets me free,
An Angel meant to be.
A part from us both,
The truth has been told,
Only I can see,
You're an Angel meant to be.
If I'm the only one,
Why would I ever run?,
You could simply be,
An Angel meant to be.
You can wipe away my tears,
You can drive away my fears,
If You could only see,
You're an Angel meant to be.
The last bit we've known,
The only thing that has grown,
Is our love, can't you see?,
We are meant to be.
2006-09-30 05:57:07 · answer #8 · answered by djskeets 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It is a very nice freestyle poem
2006-09-30 05:55:20 · answer #9 · answered by Doctor C. 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
That's cool!
2006-09-30 05:58:06 · answer #10 · answered by Hidden_Magician2233 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋