The robin sings his joy to the world,
The mouse squeaks his danger to the world,
The Englishman cries out help to the Iraqi,
And the iraqui man goes on.
Listen to the weathers' mood,
Can you hear hail bouncing on the Ground,
Or the wind whistling across where danger lurks,
A warning for the world to hear.
Do you know the mouse or the wind,
Better than I your lover,
Or could I whistle my love to you,
So you could whistle these words back.
When I'm gone will you remember,
Those words said a thousand times,
Or will my tone separate,
My words of love from any other
2006-09-29 22:12:58 · 9 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
nice going. title it random expressions/
2006-09-29 22:16:49 · answer #1 · answered by prince47 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That was really beautiful. You're an amazing poet.
I'm not the best when it comes to deciphering poetry, and you never really know unless the author comes out and tells you what it means. Everyone takes their own meanings to their heart. I don't know what it all means, but you've definately got some talent.
And wow, that was really gorgeous :) You've got a beautiful way of wording things.
2006-09-30 05:23:13 · answer #2 · answered by Little Girl 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Whats the message in the poem, what i understood was love iraqis and weather,not sure where it was going but good effort.
2006-09-30 05:19:26 · answer #3 · answered by ? 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
There is one line that looks really sore.
And its not the one about the mouse.
2006-09-30 05:30:29 · answer #4 · answered by lkraie 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
be consistent on your first paragraph and try to make sense of it from other stanza.
2006-09-30 05:16:38 · answer #5 · answered by The young Merlin 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
well...it is great..but i just dont quiet understand it.....
but anyway, put your brain n ur soul to it coz it work best when u feel it...
2006-09-30 05:29:47 · answer #6 · answered by yuma 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it.
2006-09-30 06:27:31 · answer #7 · answered by Analyst 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Pretty cool. I just dont understand it...
2006-09-30 05:15:05 · answer #8 · answered by Pyp 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
ITS REALLY GOOD .
I MYSELF WRITE POEMS....
2006-09-30 05:17:16 · answer #9 · answered by RIYA 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋