Frank gasped in pain as he was beaten wtih the stick. The man was hitting him hard with a belt, and he could not feel his side anymore. "Stop," he said as the man grabbed his arm and started to cut him. "Please just leave me alone!"
2006-09-29 07:06:46 · 8 answers · asked by dOnNa 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
The man had started beating him with the stick. Frank gasped in pain as each agonizing blow struck him, he could not feel him side anymore. "Stop, please!" He screamed as the man violent man gripped his arm, and began cutting him, "Please leave me alone!"
2006-09-29 08:28:27 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Grammatically, the paragraph is fine as it is, however, the first two sentences are inconsistent. You initially say Frank was being beaten with a stick and then without indicating a change in adversaries or methods due, for instance, to a perceived ineffectiveness, the stick becomes a belt. Your switch to a knife in the third sentence, by comparison, is not a problem in the same way, as it is introduced in a manner which suggests the stick/belt was perceived as ineffective.
2006-09-29 18:02:45 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
The man beat Frank with a stick, making him gasp in pain. Fortunately, when the man switched to a belt, Frank couldn't feel his side anymore. Nevertheless, he cried out for the man to stop. The man did stop beating him, but instead took out a knife to cut him. Finally, realizing the importance of politeness and clarity of expression, Frank said "Please just leave me alone!"
2006-09-29 16:14:41 · answer #3 · answered by Goddess of Grammar 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Frank screamed in pain as he was beaten with the buckle.The man was hitting him so hard with his belt, until he could feel his side any more. "Stop" Frank said as the man grabbed his arm and started to twist it."Please leave me alone".
2006-09-29 14:20:18 · answer #4 · answered by Knight H 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Each whip of the belt caused Frank to call out in pain. The man looked on and continued to beat him. Frank could no longer feel his side, gasping he shouted "stop," The man clasped his arm and proceeded to penetrate his skin with something sharp and shiny. As the blood spilled from his body Frank pleaded "Please just leave me alone."
2006-09-29 14:22:14 · answer #5 · answered by dan 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
There is a stick , there is a belt , and Frank is being "cut". How many hands does the beater have?.
2006-09-29 14:09:57 · answer #6 · answered by Rajesh Kochhar 6 · 2⤊ 0⤋
It should read, "How can I rephrase this sentence." There is no "a" in sentence.
There are several sentences below. To which are you referring?
2006-09-29 14:17:24 · answer #7 · answered by thylawyer 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
There are 4 sentences there, which one?
2006-09-29 14:18:06 · answer #8 · answered by jerry4_fun 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋