can u help me write this better??

Question

As the sun started to go down little by little, we walked around the track, full of dead leaves and small rocks all over. We came upon a family that consisted of a mom, a dad, and two boys around the ages of twelve to fifteen. We sat in an old, written all over bench and observed the loving family while they fished

Answer 1

As the sun started to go down little by little, we walked around the track, full of dead leaves and small rocks all over. We came upon a family that consisted of a mom, dad and two boys around the ages of twelve to fifteen where we sat on an old bench that had been written all over and observed the loving family while they fished.

Answer 2

As the sun started to go down, we walked around the track which had dead leaves and small rocks everywhere you looked. We came upon a family that consisted of a mom, a dad, and two boys around the ages of twelve to fifteen. We sat in an old, graffiti-filled bench and observed the loving family while they fished in the lake in front of us.

you don't need to use so many adjectives

Answer 3

You're close... try this...

The sun started to go down little by little. We walked around the track full of dead leaves and small rocks. There sat a family; mom, dad and two boys, both boys in their early teens. We sat on an old bench that others had carved their names into and observed the loving family while they fished.

Answer 4

As sun started going down slowly,we walked the track full of dead leaves,small rocks al over.we came across a family of four.It had mom,dad thier two children aged between 12 to 15 we watched over them a loving family while they fished...

Answer 5

As the sun slowly set, we walked around the leaf and rock-littered track. We sat in an old, graffiti-covered bench and watched a loving couple and their two teenage sons as they fished.