Can anyone help with this poem I really stink at putting them together?

Question

1.the spring rain fell on the budding flowersthe air was cool and breezya single flower burst from it's wombspring has truly arrived

2.a full moon greeted the autumn skyit lit the fields with a burst of lightthe crickets sang a mournful song as the dew gathered on the grass a lone owl called to noone in particularin the distance a tree branch fellthe wind was chilly throughout the nightautumn had truly arrived.


I have some ideas but the are seperate and dont make much sense, so if any of you have an idea of how to put them together it would be very helpful!

Answer 1

I would think that a verse about summer between the two you already have would tie them together nicely, and finish with a verse about winter.

the summer wind on gold tanned skin, ocean waves crash with the tides, days grow long and heat the nights, summer has truly arrived

crystal snow blanketing mountain tops, crisp nights as to keep warm we strive, a lone wolf howls in the frozen distance, sinter has truly arrived...

or something life that....

Answer 2

Ok, this is what I have done, its not exactly perfect but you can do what you want with it.
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Spring rain falls onto the budding flowers, falling from the tree
And the air, cool and breezy, sorrounds and encompasses me
In the distance I see a single flower, bursting from it's womb
Spring has arrived so step to the side and make some room
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Well that's all I've got so far, I've written a number of poems but it's easier to write stuff that you make yourself, I was just trying to accommodate for you. Use the one I've done as a skeleton to write your next one and you will will have an undying love for your poem in the end. (That is to say that poems you make yourself are much more cherished then the ones you find)

Answer 3

You are certainly correct on that one point. You do stink at putting them together.

Try putting each thought on a separate line (and spell-check them).

Look them over and see if any of the ideas fit together and form related thoughts.

Maybe the thoughts for each season can go in separate stanzas.

You probably need a last stanza that summarizes what is going on.

Answer 4

Ask your teacher for help. That why we pay so much in property taxes are for the school systems, so get your parents money's worth and make the teacher teach you!

Answer 5

Poetry is the easiest to write because it only has to make sense to you.

Put it in any order, as long as you like it.

But, it seems like it is already in order.